| Reviews for Raised a Lord |
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  SerenArt chapter 7 . 7/20 Harry Potter makes no sense...a lot of this just isnt accurate |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/30 I’m not really fond of all these oc’s you keep making there are plenty of characters that are barely touched in the books you could expand on and use. Daphne Greengrass, Tracy Davis, Hannah Abbot, Blaise Zabini, Theodore Nott, Susan Bones, Su Li, the Pavtil twins, the Carrow twins, |
 narutouzumaki9718 chapter 2 . 2/19 The birth year for the twins is wrong you have on here 1884 when it is supposed to be 1984. |
| HPandPJO4ever chapter 8 . 3/16/2019 This is really good! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/10/2019 Please update |
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 8 . 8/9/2017 A very interesting story here so far! Looking forward to more! |
| The Renegade Nerd chapter 8 . 6/12/2017 an awesome story so far but the problem like other users commented was that harry wakes up to look for his glasses even though he had gotten them fixed Hope you update soon |
| vgriffin4 chapter 8 . 2/12/2017 YOU GOT A PRETTY GOOD STORY GOING HERE. I HAVE ENJOYED IT QUITE ALOT WISH YOU WOULD UPDATE SOON. HOPING YOU ARE GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY. ALSO JUST A NOTE THAT IN THIS CHAPTER YOU SAY HE LOOKS AROUND FOR HIS GLASSES. BUT IN A FEW CHAPTERS BACK YOU SAID HE DIDN'T WEAR THEM AS HE HAD GOTTEN HIS EYES FIXED. YOU MAY WANT TO CORRECT THAT. ANYWAYS LOOKING FORWARD TO AN UPDATE SOON. YOU WRITE VERY WELL.. THANKS FOR THE ENTERTAINMENT PLEASE DON'T THINK OF ANYTHING BECAUSE I USE CAPS. IT'S JUST EASIER FOR ME TO SEE WHAT I WRITE, MY EYE SITE IS VERY BAD. |
| Qoheleth chapter 1 . 2/2/2017 Dear Ruby: Just thought I should mention this: It should be "James's pale, taut face". Not that I doubt that James has a taunt face, but I don't think he'd be showing it to Sirius. Sincerely, Qoheleth |
| FanfictionReader14 chapter 8 . 1/27/2017 There was a supernatural reference? I didn't find it and i'm in season 12 right now, anyway i hope you will continue this story |
| sheleg15sbc.edu chapter 8 . 1/23/2017 Following with the slight hope you might pick this story back up. |
| anthony.pengelly.10 chapter 8 . 2/23/2016 good hope for more |
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 8 . 6/13/2015 there an error in this chapter when Harry wakes its says he puts on his glasses but in a previous chapter you say he had it fixed Stasia R. Ravenclaw |
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 3 . 6/13/2015 Animagus: Iberian lynx Stasia R. Ravenclaw |
| BMS chapter 2 . 5/28/2015 Why would Gringotts give a list of the Black properties to Dumbledore? He has no connection to the Black family. That would violate client confidentiality. Also He overcame the wards on #12 way too quick for one wizard acting alone, empty house or no and finally, I'm pretty sure Sirius' mother is still alive at this point in time not to mention Kreature. Best of luck w/ your story but I can already tell its not for me. |
