yo, okay but this was the first chapter and I swear, I can just tell that this is going to give me a warm feeling in my stomach.I could feel the magic emitting from this chapter. Like, you literally grabbed me by the hand, told me "c'mon!" and dragged me into the story with you. And I enjoyed every moment of it. I caught myself smiling ear to ear when Mr. Fazbatch was demonstrating how interactive the animationics could be with the audience. And that one line, "The crowd inhaled". I was so engrossed in this story that I held my breath with the crowd and sighed in enjoyment when it was shown just how interactive and aware they were with their audience.
And when Foxy made himself known to the crowd, I laughed at how amazing it was that the dialogue matched with Foxy's personality almost identically to how I thought he'd be portayed while out and about in the daytime.
This is barely the beginning, and you already have me at the edge of my seat. Thank you so much for writing this. It's very difficult to find a fnaf fanfiction with no self inserts, no horrible grammar and an easy plotline to follow. You really outdid yourself and I'm so proud of you! Keep it up!

This is a pretty fun little take on the FNAF restaurant. I feel bad for poor Mikey though :/.

hug those melons pfffft XD

hope Mike can get his job back and be friends with the Freddy gang again

Mike come back! they didn't know better! and you have to apologize to Boonie for making her cry!

thank goodness Foxy didn't cover Mike's mouth

and those guys are so doomed

uh oh Chica pissed XD

it's sweet how Freddy starts talking like Farbach

Oh I get it Fazbatch as in Fitschbatch , the surname of Markiplier, the King of Five Nights at Freddy's! That's cool that you used his name

Ahhhh, yes. The flashbacks centered around misunderstanding, helping us understand the story better. This installment was a great step forward, and it only got better.

Oh this is gonna be good! Love Chica's getting serious, as much as I love how they distinguish between Mike, and Endoskeletons. On the edge of my seat. On to the next chapter!

This has been quite an entertaining series so far. From the looks of things they really are AI, which means that Phone Guys initial assessment was right. I find the most interesting subplot to be how they reclassified Mike to just be Mike as opposed to a metal endo skeleton.

That note at the end of your story was hilarious, and sounds like the plot of a c movie. But still, your stories are great, I just thought that little not deserved mention

Ohohohoh they done messed up!

I am getting some sort of dark satisfaction from seeing those vandals terrified...

Oh those guys that are breaking into places are SO going for Freddy's next... they don't know what they're in for...

Nhhg this is already starting in an interesting way ~

So Freddy started mimicking Mr. Fazbach's mannerisms, that's cute :3