are you going to update Ink or Sink

Having a summary is nice. With how long this goes between chapters, I forget what one character or an event that happened.

How you would incorporate turf wars into your writing would be really cool to see. I’m also really interested for the what would be in the library.

Vicious from 365 showing up here is pretty cool. I think that Heracles is Icarus. I’m not sure if I’m seeing a connection because I want to but he said he has twins which could refer to the Pits and the scars could be where wings used to be. It’s been a while since I read this so it’s nice to see this still updating.

Hey, swordsman!

...That's what your avatar profile looks like. Anyways, it's a great chapter. I've read all chapters, but I have to say that this is a good start, keep it up!

By the way, there are OCs I know, but are you actually planning on making a fanfiction and ask everyone to review or PM you their OC sheet?

It's interesting that Alex is in that game because I don't really see how it will work into the plot it's an interesting choice. Also, that truly is the best news station.

I agree with what you wrote about thunder armor and bond phenomenon. Just, why did they decide to do the thunder armor and make that the bond phenomenon? Also, it's pretty interesting to see what happens at this point.

Well, I did not expect a Shadow Mewtwo. Speaking of Shadow Pokémon, I'm really sad they never created another Shadow Pokémon game. They were rather interesting and fun to play.

I feel the same about the badge arcade. I used so much money on that! I think that Hayden's ability is pretty cool. And the timing of this chapter is strange because I just got Bravely Second today.

You got the special edition? I misses it...
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Good chapter as always!
-thehobkin

I think Hades called Dark Pit "Goth Pit" or something like that.

Wait, so Samus died? Wow. The title of the chapter is really appropriate for the ending of it. O MY GOD MYSTERIOUS VOICE!

Pretty good chapter. I skimmed through most of it because I'm tired right now but it was still great. A couple of grammar issues but nothing big.

Quick warning: the first Project X Zone is sorta big if I remember correctly. YAY! Grace and Chloe are gone! I don't like them! The Swarm evolving like that is a really good idea.

Wow. This was quite the chapter indeed. The Swarm and its' connection to everything, in a way. Not sure if Tabuu will be the Smasher's greatest ally or worst enemy now... and I'm guessing Nugai wanted the Wire Frame to impersonate him in the real world so he'd be more free to act.

I'm interested in the logic dropped about stagnating worlds because things aren't changed... and I'm also definitely looking forward to you bashing Other M here. I once considered a story along those lines, but the sheer effort of looking through Metroid: Other M again for the details I'd need made me cringe.