after reading 7 chapters, i was hoping that the story would be not canon since sasuke is there and woyld be able tom somewhat change the original storyline.

Thank you very much for this story, one of the greatest fanfics in my opinion. Very ingenious concept and crossover, Very well written, you also incorporated the origins of the two universes, the stories of Indra and Madara, as well as how Sasuke ended up in middle earth in the first place. I liked how you creatively made use of the fact that the LOTR's world is called "middle" earth. The flow of the story was excellent, and the way you described the scenes was very well done, it's almost as if I'm watching the trilogy, with Sasuke and company incorporated seamlessly into the scenes. I hope you create a prequel of this story, about Madara's time in middle earth and how he helped the dwarves. I'm also very happy that Thorin is alive in this story. THANK YOU VERY MUCH ONCE AGAIN AND PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

Writing this mid-read, just mentioning that Mithril Armour made for Madara...it's like a big red flag yelling "Sasuke's gonna get a set of Mithril armour in future which is probably going to stop a sudden attack because we're expected to forget about it after he gets it!"

And that line "Everyone else knew that not a good thing." drew my attention to the fact that some parts of this story make me feel like I'm being talked down to, like I can't piece those things together myself.

If Gandalf doesn't know something, the one most-versed in the unknown things that are found across Middle-Earth, then, of course, that's a bad thing.

I did have a look, the movie never shows it anywhere, but I did get distracted into watching ten minutes of awesome combat, so that's a plus.

Still enjoying this, just want you to know that. I don't have anything really positive to say other than just in general it's enjoyable to read. Sorry if my reviews make me sound so negative, I just notice that stuff way more than the positive stuff.

Rest assured, I do honestly enjoy this, even if there are a...few problems.

Hmm, I'm a bit confused about why Sasuke didn't use either a different, less risky Jutsu on the Watcher, like a Katon Jutsu, or physically gone on the offensive with his Chokuto.

He's the fastest and strongest member of the Fellowship, evidenced by the fact he held his own blindfolded against Elladan and Elrohir, who were attacking with intent to kill by the end of their bout. So him standing back and using a Raiton Jutsu in an area covered in water seemed pretty silly. Sure, he's lightning natured, but he can still use Katon, Doton, Suiton and Fuuton Jutsu. A single Wind Release: Air Bullet would have made the Watcher drop Frodo.

But whatever, still enjoyed this chapter.

It makes sense to have them both glow.

I believe the reason Glamdring didn't glow was because trying to make it happen was just too difficult. Sting wasn't drawn too often, or in the presence of Orcs, which was why it glowed. Having them both act like beacons when Orcs are close is pretty reasonable.

I am curious to see how people react to Sasuke using any kind of Jutsu. Or if he actually has Jutsu he can use in Middle-Earth. He should, but who knows.

Uhh, wrong way around there, Pippin acts before thinking, not thinking before acting, that Author's Note is a little wrong.

Not a big deal though. This was fun, even if I'm now crossing my fingers and practically begging that no more people found their way to Middle-Earth...

If Itachi slows up, I'm giving up. Indra? Sure, that's cool. Madara? O...kay then, still alright, but please no more.

Two others are enough in my opinion.

But hey, I enjoyed this, and Sasuke's strength seemed very reasonable, considering how fast canon characters can move. Did you know Might Guy can run at over Mach 400 during the beginning of the Fourth Shinobi War? That's pretty insane huh?

I don't think Arwen is a location...

You might want to change that to (Location: Trollshaws) since that's the name of the forest Arwen rode through to evade the Nazgul. Also, it'd sound a bit nicer if instead of being called Half-elven, you gave Elrond his Sindarin name, Peredhel. Half-elven almost sounds like a slur, at least in my mind.

To be honest, I thought this was going to be Itachi at first. The cloak made that assumption stronger, but the talk of him channelling his friend was off, since I didn't get that kind of impression from Shisui. Then when he's revealed as Sasuke, it all made sense.

Fun story.

Definitely an interesting first chapter

I was really enjoying this story. It was nicely written well paced and really interesting.

Buuuut you go and turn Naruto into a fucking cuck! What is actually wrong with you. Couldn't enjoy the rest of the story if I tied with that shit storm lingering around.

From the bottom of my heart go fuck yourself.

Just put tag sasuke along you dummy. I read this story like 2 hours. Just put some fucking sasuke tag and that enough. If you use this trick you just like another author who has no confident in their writing and scare that no one read their stories. I love all your story but this stories is bullshit and disgusting. I even try not to vomit out of my stomach.

Fuck u Sasuke is a hoe

Type your review here.a naruto fanfic where thers no naruto in it hahahaha

I'm glad Sasuke's susanoo got a Nerf, I haven't read much further past that yet, but yeah it was nice to see that balrog fhim up, I thought that was an insta win for him.

What's the point of adding Sasuke of nothing changes from canon events? Slave of canon. Pathetic.

THANK YOU! Seeing Naruto in all these different situations gets bring after a while. I like where this is going.