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Giggle fest. Great story...

This was really nice :D

I love the whole Lucy-setting-things-right-with-Loke plot you've got going. I like Loke, and I know he's just flirting with Lucy for shits and giggles but if he'd been serious, I know for a fact that he would deserve to have that talk with her.

I'm also glad you made him accept his loss without any sort of outburst on his part. Leos may be hot tempered but they always accept defeat elegantly

And Natsu... Oh, Natsu. I don't even know where to start with you... Lucy sure has her work cut out for her.

P.S. The cherry blossom petals were a nice touch. I usually forget about the time Natsu brought Lucy a Sakura tree. What is wrong with me?! Isn't that like, one of the most epic NaLu cornerstones in the fandom? XD

Anyways, good job! Keep it up!

Adorable!

Please let there be a bouns chapter pretty please with nalu onto

Very nice. You could make this a two or three shot if you wanted, but it's fine where it is.

Awwwww! Ima cry wit joy

Kyaaaaa i loved the last part! Natsu ur sooooo cute! Nalu4EVA