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SpiritofLove961 chapter 22 . 7/16/2017 You did a great job with my request; thanks so much! I enjoyed reading these fics and this collection is so going in my faves! Love, Spirit |
Hydes chapter 22 . 7/12/2017 Noooooo! This is over? Already? In the blink of an eye. I am truly sad... I adored this collection and I do hope to see your future work Nacchi. Reading your earlier work and comparing it to your recent work is truly an honor. I like your progression. You express Kazuya and Eijun's feelings very nicely. This last chapter seemed fitting for it being the last of the collection as well. A wedding and honeymoon theme. While it was in the overly romantic category it was such nice welcomed fluff. I don't even where to begin. I absolutely loved the proposal scene because it is just like Eijun to casually mention a wedding, letting his mouth get ahead of his mind not remembering the one important detail of actually proposing and Kazuya's internal borderline freak out/shut down but saying that yes in the end because he chooses happiness over everything else and he sees Eijun in his future, wants that future. This brought so many feelings and the little hints of how even though same sex marriage is legal in Japan it still isn't something that is truly accepted. That scene in the subway hit me a little, but again Kazuya to the rescue this time, reassuring Eijun that he was there with him, for him. What do you mean Daiya no stupidity? I am all for drunk Seido members opening up amongst themselves. I laughed a good while at how Ryousuke just had all this dirt on Eijun and everyone else. Oh but Eijun strip teasing through a dare? Of course he would rise up to the challenge lol. It's so him. The fact everyone else is either amused or horrified makes it all the better and I love how you write their friends and the level of closeness each one gains. As for the restroom scene well, *wipes sweat* they really had pent up sexual tension didn't they? They couldn't even wait to get to their hotel. The honeymoon scenes though, while brief they were a treat. I like how the first day we get the floof with their cuddling in bed and the second day is just them traveling around everywhere, sneaking kisses and hand holding and photos and mutual staring. They are so grossly in love I ate it all up! The way it ends too! It's all so lovely and made me feel. I also do like the idea of Kazuya being very close and comfy with the Sawamuras. :') It's sweet. This whole fic was sweet and tooth rotting but very beautiful. It had the humor and the feelings and a hint of angst here and there which is my favorite combination. Great job and I will wait for new stories from you. |
AstralSpiritus chapter 22 . 7/11/2017 Holy mother of french fries! This is over? No.. :{ I was just getting into your frequent updates. Your stories were such a treat for me! and they were so lengthy too. Right when I get back into misawa hell you end this collection. Damn you. I can't wait for your new fics tho. I'll be lurking on ao3 and here. The wedding fic tho... I never thought I would ever see you write one? Bc I remember you telling me it was hard for you visualize anything having to do with wedding ceremonies, what happens after, etc. etc. but that was years ago when I barely started reading your writing and look at chu now! This fic was probably one of your best domestic/aged up miyusawa fics I have ever read. I got sucked into it right from the get go and a Miyuki that's hopelessly in love with Sawamura are my weakness too. As much as I luv the smut and intimate moments where they stare and kiss and touch a lot, I think I enjoyed how you took us on a mini little trip of Osaka with them. Felt like I was traveling with them too. I know you said it was challenging writing that part out but even if you didn't cover most of those places you wanted to write about it was still a lovely fic. |
SpiritofLove961 chapter 21 . 7/1/2017 These fics were so amazing and I'm loving this pairing! I hope to see more of these; do you take requests? Love, Spirit |
MusicHenni133 chapter 21 . 6/30/2017 This was just fantastic. I really loved this one, it was so good~~ Thank you so much for writing it And yeah, I think it'd be a good number to end it at. And you should definitely transfer some of these over to AO3, I'm certain that those who haven't already read these on here would be delighted to read them over there. You could just post them separately from now on if you feel like it'd be better to end the collection of those one-shots here and post them separately instead. Tho I'd still love to read more of your stories. |
Hydes chapter 21 . 6/29/2017 *heart eyes* Thank you for this 7k monster Nacchi. This was wonderful and their playful banter was so enjoyable! Don't mind on not being able to write the angst for me. You didn't even have to write for me but I'm so happy I got the blind au trope of you and they are both baseball coaches! Yes! It made me so happy PLUS YOU WROTE SMUT? I love this and I love you. Thanks again for being so great. They're so thirsty for each other in this and it's great. Miyuki just instantly thinking the world of Sawamura? I'm listening. Sawamura liking the banter between him and Miyuki and them instantly clicking and having this noticeable sexual tension? I'm sold. You can have my soul. Take it. As for ending it at this story... that's so hard to decide T_T if you want to post these things separately though that would be lovely and your stories would get more attention in my opinion. |
AstralSpiritus chapter 20 . 6/24/2017 WHY HAVE I NOT SEEN THIS GOLDMINE? YOUR MIYUSAWA IS SUPER CUTE AND I CAN SEE THE GROWTH IN YOUR WRITING? IT'S WONDERFUL AND PRETTY PLEASE CAN YOU MAYBE WRITE SOMETHING ANGSTY? I haven't seen you write something with too much angst : |
HM chapter 20 . 6/22/2017 This is a gem. I adore hitman!au and this captures everything I love about it. Paired it with misawa and I'm sold. An amazing piece! I love how you portrayed Eijun and I can imagine how Kazuya would fall in love with him. Eijun is just too cool in this I can't help but swoon! Great work! On an unrelated note, I was wondering if you would consider posting this as a separate one shot? But if you feel uncomfortable its alright! |
MusicHenni133 chapter 20 . 6/10/2017 Yes. That is my feeling for this fic. Cuz i am /all/ for miyusawa hitman au. Tho tbh i'm a total goner for hitman au in general, but a /miyusawa/ hitman au is A, i gotta say. Wonderful writing, i very much enjoyed this. I gotta thank you for spending the time to write this wonderful one-shot. And tbh, long one-shots are the best one-shots, so dw about it being too long, or being unable to do short ones. I really really enjoyed this, it was so good. I also adore your humor, it's great. |
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Oh-rina chapter 18 . 5/13/2017 THANKS BABE! THIS WAS A NICE READ FOR MY FLUFFY HEART. I loved it! It was just a prank though. I didn't expect you to write this beast of a fic but har har don't care! I got a nice present! I love jealous Miyuki ;_; have I ever told you? Jealous and insecure but also aware of his feelings for Sawamura, Miyuki. He's my fave. TY so much. I want to see more from youuuuuuu. You don't HAVE to really write this but maybe... like a Koushuu focused fic with sawamura and Miyuki feeling insecure? OR if we going AUish, then maybe like a waiter au since I READ YOUR SABOACE ONE or reincarnation or guardian angel au *TOSSES AUs AT YOUR PRETTY FACE* |
Nyma chapter 12 . 2/24/2016 I really liked that chapter and I'm glad that Miyuki woke up. So many emotions slapped me with this. |
Ex-megane chapter 17 . 4/6/2015 Miyuki you idiot. How could you didn't even know?! |
Q chapter 17 . 4/6/2015 Aw I really enjoyed that! |
thefujoshifreak chapter 1 . 3/20/2015 Hello! Definitely waiting for updates for this, since it's very hard to find decent Daiya no Ace fics :'( I'd like to make a request from here if possible xp cuz it's too troublesome to go onto tumblr again, but could you do a Valentines day theme for MiSawa / ? Thanks and keep up the great work! |