pls update soon

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Do you have plans to continue this? Because this idea and fic is so cute, :'D

I can literally feel the gentleness and warmth, and d'awww. :'D

I think you should definitely continue this fic, but I would suggest one or two alterations. The progression of the story sounds somewhat incoherent here and there, and that makes it difficult to follow. I think you should give more detail to the thoughts roaming through Lucy's mind and also give her a slightly more solid stance on how she feels in each situation: is she confused, pleased, uncomfortable, secure? Experiment with imagery and a lot more "mood" (comforting, menacing, frenzied, joyful) terms to indicate what the reader's impression is supposed to be as the characters go through their motions.

Ooooooo how exciting! I see an opening for another chapter/ sequel! Were you thinking of writing more? It's really good! :D

*dies because this is the cutest thing ever* omg I'm like squealing my head off. That was freaking adorable! And funny too, but mostly adorable because... Well, it was simply adorable. :D

I appreciate your grammar so much! It's really hard to find a fic around here with a great plot and great grammar, so thank you! I don't think I saw any mistakes at all. :)

My only complaint is that this isn't longer. xD Please make it a two-shot and continue where Lucy starts to give Natsu "the fire." ;)

Over all, I loved it! Going to my favorites!

-CeeCee

Sequel. Now.

Love it please do more

OH MY!