Interesting chapter this was.

Will you opdate the total drama story soon?

GREAT RETURN ! I MISSED THIS STORY A LOT ! YOU HAD ME WORRY DUDE !

I really hate the whole 2 lightning slayers it's dumb why not ice , earth ,darkness why lightning it makes mc feel worthless since that's laxus magic you know

Another Dreyar with lightning magic? I really hope you didn't write an entire story and create a completely new main character, just to make him a Laxus ripoff.

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Great story, just done reading. And also, thank you for making this one. im hoping that my best christmas gift will be your updates for this story. Keep it up author-san

Great chapter on the? long journey,so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

What happens next

NNOOOOOOO! wtf!? Mira will give up?! then what's the point of this sub plot if there will be no changes?! i rarely approve or a harem and you're crushing it! add Mira to the relationship!

jeez this love issue about Mira is breaking my heart. just share him goddammit! you two might grow to like it as well.

oh man i feel bad for Mira this better become a threesome relationship

oh shit a love triangle that'll spice things up. im not really into harem that much but after the flashbacks maybe adding Mira won't be bad i mean adding one more won't hurt.

ch 20 well that was a bit pathetic he's just a downgraded Laxus. and lessen the emotional and cringy lines save that mushy side to Erza. also make him badass less talk no jutsu and more kicking ass.

yup exactly the same as Laxus. you should've given him a different type of dragon lacrima and why does it have to be half wouldn't it make it weaker.