Reviews for The Beast
Wulffhardt chapter 12 . 5/17/2017
how hard did you party
Rwbyfan54 chapter 11 . 1/11/2015
When will you make this go into the first chapte and will ruby fight the creature or is she dead I just re read this and found out you don't hint anything like the beast again or something like that from the first chapter
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 11 . 1/11/2015
OOhh great update, and tense cliff hanger! :)
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 10 . 1/4/2015
Awww, poor blake! interesting update though. Looking forward to more.
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 9 . 12/29/2014
great update! Glad they made up.
Rwbyfan54 chapter 9 . 12/27/2014
I think the person in the cloak is Adam
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 8 . 12/18/2014
Great update!
rwbyfan45 chapter 7 . 11/26/2014
what do u plan on doing to link the first chapter with the story caus its a cliffhanger that i really want to see how the event turns up with Ruby and the beast that is stalking her
Guest chapter 6 . 11/23/2014
Please write more
PiLamdaOd chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
This was an interesting chapter. However on the whole the chapters feel random and disjointed. There is no clear connective or plot, and this is hurting the story.
If the chapters could be linked together with an over arching plot than that issue would be taken care of.
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
great update :)
Guest chapter 5 . 11/1/2014
Please write a more i love this!
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 5 . 11/1/2014
great update :) I am glad that yang and blake are a couple :D
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 4 . 10/5/2014
great fic so far! :)
Tatopatato chapter 2 . 9/18/2014
The beast is blake, isn't it?
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