Nice chapter. Awesome we got to meet two new characters. I liked both Shaun and Brooklyn Pov. Wonder what Shaun knows about the two thieves. Kind of funny with Brooklyn Pov. Hmm wonder what the people in black were looking for

OHOHO I WONDER WHATS UP WITH THESE VILLAINS BLOWING EVERYTHING UP.

I got super excited when I saw that this got an updateeee. :D The scene where they beat up all the bad guys was epicc. It was fun reading Brooklyn's POV, hehe. I LOVE THEM ALL THOUGH.

Looking forward to the next update! :3

Nice chapter so it seems Fen and her gang got the day off and they went to the amusement park. And she saved the park also with the help of Jonathan. Wonder if Shaun knows who the two people are who stoked the artificats

This was an awesome chapter and i really the battle. Yeah at least Eric managed to get forgiven by Fen and man is Fen strong, being able to take two opponents downs and injuiring the third one. As always keep up with the great work

Great chap and i loved the battle scene man is Fen strong enough to take out two opponents and injuired the third one. I also like the scene with Erik and the reasoning of taking Fen spot with the subsitute all just for Fen can forgive him. Oh and great job with my oc. Mhhm not sure who the two mistery people are, i guess will find out sooner or later

Liked the battle scene. :)

You finally updated! I mean, at least you update faster than me (since I haven't updated a story in months now...)!

Great job, and I think I have an idea on who the two are! But, I'm not gonna say it; I'll patiently wait for the reveal! Again, amazing work, so keep it up!

Poor boys. TT
Hopefully Fen wouldn't have to throw a lamp at them again next time, lul.
Definitely interested to find out Erika and Fen's history. (:

Oh man, poor boys getting hurt before their actual fight. Although their situation was quite hilarious, that's why you should always knock.
Can't wait for the fight!

Yeay my oc is a special judge so much power my oc contains for the day anyways. Man i couldnt stop laughing with the bad luck the boys have in the team already getting injuired by their female teammates haha. Cant wait for next chapter and see the battle

Hahahahaha, great chapter .

loved the funny scenes, i cant wait to see the next chapter.
great dialogue and character interactions

Aw, Treble-chan, you didn't gave to make Erika a main character! That's so nice of you! And I wanna do a lot for you because I'm nice like that :D. Anyways, great job on the story, and I can't wait to read more! So keep up the good work, okay?

Oh man oh man now i really cant wait for the next chap. Poor guys already getting injuired before the matches even started. Man my oc should pay more closely who he runs into he wouldn't want another shadow claw haha. Great job as alway cant wait for the next update and keep up with the great work

SHOOT I FORGOT THE BACKSTORY
I'M SO SORRY
Oh dear, full out fighting, eh?
This is getting me a little freaked out. Don't judge me, I just freak out when something like this chapter happens.

I'm enjoying it so far, good job :) I'm interested to see the fight next chapter! Shaun should really learn to knock, hopefully the lamp in his face taught him that hehe. Keep up the good work! :)