When lucy said “forget about that girl you like and focus on me” i passed out lol

Very sexy again! Just remember that safe sex isn't just about preventing unwanted pregnancies- which I'm sure you know :)- the former twishadowhunter/cosmicdragonwizard/dragon-shield-maiden/star-crossed -dragon still hoping to be back ASAP one day if I'm able despite having to let go of accounts in early 2017, and then in may, June and late July this year due to restrictive home life involving family

Use of Words: 9/10
Plot: 6.75/10
Story Flow: 7/10 Overall: 7.50/10

Kinda rushed but good none the less

oh its hot alright :D

I really think you should turn this into a full on fanfic. Like, chapters before this and after, maybe Lucy gets drunk and forget her pill the next morning because her hang over was too bad. And she get pregnant.

F*ING THANK YOU FOR ALL THE CONSENT! Seriously, though, it irks me that most fics don't have it as realistically as this one does where Natsu and Lucy check in with one another, and that they check in with each other every separate time they do something different for that matter. And on that note, having them actually discuss BIRTH CONTROL rather than just leaving it up in the air as to whether or not Natsu impregnates her since the concept is so rarely discussed in other fics. So as far as my safe sex meter goes, this one get something like a 9 or 9.5/10 (I'm only taking off points b/c it's implied that Natsu might be a bit tipsy, which is a consent no-no, but it's only implied, and he still acts responsibly in my book just by constantly thinking through what he's doing with Lucy.)
As far as my literature meter goes, I'd ask for two things: one, that you write some of the scenes a bit more descriptively here and there to be a little more immersive, and two, comb through it a bit, because the occasional grammar and spelling mistakes just break the loveliness of the storytelling. Otherwise, though, this is a solid premise. It's believable, a nice to-the-point drabble, and fun to read. Thanks so much for the fic!

Ok?!

I love this

Aw cute! :)

wow! this was awesome! Great job! :D

Lewd
But I approve whole heartedly