| Reviews for In the Darkness |
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  hi chapter 11 . 5/4/2019 yeah! Wait - what? |
| hi chapter 7 . 5/4/2019 this is for dipper i would have screamed "hell yea! caroline's a d**k" and run away screaming. also last time i checked Gruncle Stan wanted them to curse. |
| 7-18-1-4-25 chapter 8 . 2/18/2018 Deny is misspelled at the beginning. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/17/2018 “I beat you Caroline” should be “I beat you,Caroline” |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/17/2018 Also, did bill contact Mabel by posssessing that older guy? |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/17/2018 This is Grady again. I am pointing out that friends should actually be friend’s, “However”should be “however,” ,”so” should be “so,” ,The last one I’m going to say is the sentence,”Caroline apparently the right women again” should be “Caroline was appearently not the right women for me”. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/17/2018 This is Grady again. I just wanted to point out that in the sentence “meanwhile dipper” should actually be “meanwhile,dipper” also “Instantly she” should actually be “Instantly,she” 6-18-15-13,7-18-1-4-25. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/17/2018 What do you know,Bill is my favorite character because I find him interesting. Also, in the sentence “ yeesh kid” should actually be “ yeesh, kid”. 6-18-15-13, 7-18-1-4-25. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/17/2018 I’m pointing things out again. You said,”which made dipper was gag”, it should actually say,”which made dipper gag”. Also, you said “hu?”, whic should actually say “huh?”. 6-18-15-13, 7-18-1-4-25. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/17/2018 As again,I’m pointing things the sentence,”That chick is a sicko”, even though it should be psycho, and you misspelled finger again. 6-18-15-13, 7-18-1-4-25. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/17/2018 As I did before, I’m pointing this out. Remember you said Greases Diner,even though it in the show it’s Greasy’s Diner. 6-18-15-13, 7-18-1-4-25. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/17/2018 Again, I am just pointing this out, but were should actually be we’re, the sentence “No! last time you promised us a queen and it wasn’t even a girl no.” should actually be “ No! last time you promised us a queen and it wasn’t even a girl” 6-18-15-13, 7-18-4-25. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 I am a thirteen year old boy. I am not exactly an athlete. But you know what? If anybody tried to hurt or abuse my little brother, I would make them regret they ever laid a hand on him. With a whole ton of physical pain. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/31/2016 Dipping sause stop being so sadistic in the a/n's man... We dont need another Akabane Karma here... *cough* Assassination Classroom *coughcoughcough*someone help im dieing*cough* |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/31/2016 *reads bottom A/N* lol Grunckle Stan Confirmed |
