where's Cagalli?

Kinda wish some of these titles would continue sometime...for some reason old titles never get revisited...even during writers block for newer stories.

When you continue this story can you bring back Athrun mother in this story and if you PM Patrlot-112 and 117-Jorn about that you can get a few ides how to do just that and more. Great story by the way.

I have a few ideas on what you can do to upgrade the Strike into Strike 2.0.
1. Exchange the Phase Shift Armor with Luna Titanium Armor.
2. Have the battery removed and have a Fusion reactor in it's place.
3. Change the hips so that the Strike can carry two beam sabers, Sword issue, instead of knives in it's default mode.
4. Change the cockpit layout with a panoramic display.
5. Upgrade the Striker Packs by combining them into the perfect strike, change the sword design (Impulse's Sword Design).

So I feel like I need to apologize for being to pushy on the pairing thing. Do not get me wrong I still like the idea of Alexander/Kira pairing but this isn't my story, and you should do whatever (or no)pairing that you like/works.

So I'm Sorry.

And I was going to put something else in here but I can not remember what it was, hmm. Well sorry for the grammar.

I admit that this story isn't all that great. It is however better than most stories on this site and is what I would consider to be passably entertaining. In general it suffers from being typically cliche and painfully predictable. another issue you have is that there are entire scenes that really aren't moving the plot forward. If your following close to canon then it's best to stream line things as much as possible for the readers like me who have read the same damn story a hundred times over and just stick with the critical bits. The characters are also coming off as a bit flat, mostly because your OCs aren't really being fleshed out too well. Basically you need to make what you've changed more detailed and not bore us readers with the stuff we already know.

Overall this is a decent story that is worth reading but really needs some extra oomph to make it truly good. That said, I doubt it will matter given how long this story has sat idle, but perhaps you'll rewrite it in the future.

wow nice story hope to read more soon in the future!

very god.

Hope you can update soon, still not tired of reading this story several times a month. :) As to the support for a Alex/Kira pairing, its partly because the most fanfics pick between Flay, Lacus, or Cagalli [incest or no], so any other well-done pairing is a fresh change of pace. To be honest, though, their interactions as so smooth it just seemed natural you guys were going that route. XD

No, no, no... I'm a huge fan of Kira / Lacus. :(

Great chapter Update soon

Neat-o, Kira gets to meet Lowe early! :)

I have to say, the A/N at the end of this chapter makes me sad. Personally, I can't see Kira ending up with anyone other than Lacus. Sometimes it seems like they were made for each other (not the best choice of words, considering that they are Coordinators -_-). I especially can't see him paired up with a career soldier as anything other than 'just friends' in the long run. On the other hand, I could see Alexandra filling in as an 'older sister'-type figure for a while...

I do have one suggestion related to writing style. I usually find an author throwing in a comment about how "Of course, Group A had no idea Group B was planning to do _" (like the first paragraph of the "Debris Belt" section) to be a little off-putting.

Other than that, well done! I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter!
Wraith Five

Ensign By the Book is going to love this.

Either she's going to blow a gasket about the two sinking a Nelson and destroying her escort or she's going to blow a gasket about how poorly said ship performed and what it had been up to.

Kira/Alexandra pairing?

I see no problem with it. I've seen Mu and Murrue paired with other in the Kenneth DiFalco stories. The Originals no less. Cagalli get paired with an OC before. Let's see, who else? I know someone had Yzak once paired with an OC. So I'm fine with it.

The only I noticed is that you don't use Italic for ship names. I've always seen that done and do so myself. The only exception is when you have an entire sentence in Italic and therefore, you leave in printed form.

There is going to be so much fallout from this.

Also, Because I'm not sure it was considered. Why can't the Archangel and Sverige exchange supplies?