Tnx mate!

Starscream seems a little to whiny and cowardly, much more than in the show. In the Prime cartoon, Starscream isn't a joke and whenever it looks like he is, the show reminds us why Megatron puts up with him.

And so it is finished. Not the best, but a lot better than most of the trash on this site people call literature. Also, I highly respect how much effort you've put into stories, which is a lot more than most.

Good job. Now I want to see what happens to Vince in the later episodes.

A very action-packed scene, this fanfic has really turned into your version of an action film summer blockbuster.

please update the final chapter or start the episode 4 of transformers prime season 3 you haven't update in ten days please.

FINALLY! EPIC! And now we wait once more.

I love this story. In my opinion your Series 3 rewrite is completely superior to the official one (Which had a great opening leading into a fairly weak season, albeit with a pretty nice finale) but even if Hasbro had done your plot line (Albeit with trademarked characters replaced with someone else) there is no way we would have got this, we would have seen the ruins of jasper and the survivors like inn your second 'episode' but we would certainly never have gotten something like this, telling us how things got the way they'd got while the Autobots had been hiding from the cons and fighting MECH.
The only minor weak point is something out of your control and something the all prequels and pre-sequels and the like suffer, some of the suspense the story could have is lost because we know who lives and who dies, the only suspense would be with characters that weren't mentioned in the later (internal universe time line-wise) story because they might have just been in the background and not mentioned in the other story or they might have died.
Either way I love this story, I love the Season 3 series and because of your extended time between updates a new one causes a miniature celebration instead of more regular ones where we start to get annoyed when there is a slightly too long time gap between updates. Basically all this is saying is that I love what you're doing and keep up the good work!

I love your work luisjm but please update your transformers prime headmaster episode please

Can't wait to see it! Hopefully once you're done with this story you will get back to the 'Headmaster' episode.

I. HAVE A SUGGESTION FOR A NEW SEPERate storY TOTATLY UN RELEATED TO THIS STORY LINE Jack Darby is the soundwaves MINICON RAVAGE to start off your storyLINE Jack goes with agent FOWLER in the HELICOPTER you coNTINUE AFTER THAT

Poor Vince :( great chapter! Great to see shockwave in action.

Awesome chapter! I would like to see the two chapters together, but that is completely up to you. This is really getting good :) please update soon!

Hi.
Nice story. In my opinion, not as good as your main storyline, but whatever.
Also, can you try to break up your paragraphs? I know someone already said this, but I'll say it again: walls of text are VERY difficult to read without losing concentration. I ended up skipping a lot of the story on my first reading of it because I couldn't focus.
But yeah. Nice story.

Awesome intro. I'm really excited to read this. Keep up the good work :)