Why are so many people in love with marlene

I love your story this isn't the first time I have read it. I'm not going to pretend I know what you are going through, but please do what you have to to feel better! Don't push yourself to do things that won't help! Love the story :)

Well HURRY UP

Miranda, totally

I like Sadie for someone who is sweet and soft, and Miranda is good for either a real funky one or a hardcore kid. Charlotte is probably for smart people or goody two shoes. I don't like Elliot because it sounds really old fashioned. Noah and Eden aren't that good either. I think a good name for a boy would be Jackson or Davis

Cara and Caleb works

Make tris get pregnant then upset cause thinks she gonna get miscarriage but actually manages to have kid. No children for tris and tobias is killing me. Make tris kid a girl called Natalie after her mother. Just an idea

Boys
Elliot

I'm glad your getting better. Just keep up the good work. Your an awesome writer so don't ever put yourself down. good luck with the new story. I'll be reading and loving it.

Hey! I'm so sorry to hear this. I'm really glad you're getting better, though. I think it's been a while since I've left a review, but I do want to tell you again how incredible your writing and character accurate-ness is. You are a very talented writer! I so sorry that you've had to be hospitalized several times, but glad that you're healing. And please just remember, if you ever need anyone to talk/rant to, I'm here. :) Sometimes you just have to find healing and strength inside yourself. (I know- it's really hard! I've had similar situations!) I hope everything continues to get better, and wish you all the best!

This was such a great story, so hopefully some day when you are in a healthier place you will get a chance to come back to it. I am glad you were able to get help and I know I look forward to reading your new story.

I'm so sorry about your health issues. I hope you get better soon!

A cute name would be
Girl: Sadie May
Boy: Christopher William (Chris)

OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER I LOVE ALL THESE CHARACTERS PLEASE WRITE MORE IF YOU CAN :D

YOU ARE SUCH A TALENTED WRITER. You should try write a book on wattpad or something! But (sorry) i want to point out that its 'perspective' not 'prospective' so you can try remember to fix it. You have no idea how wrapped up in the story i am right now.