Volume 5 started a joke about Cinder being a yandere in love with Jaune because she kept attacking all the girls he liked, and before I knew it, I found myself shipping them. I loved reading this. Thank you for writing it. Felt like it really could have happened.

Couldn't stop smiling as I read this. Could completely see Atlantean's idea coming to life from this on. Keep up the good work.

FW out VwV

Whoa...

OMG so cute! You did such a wonderful job! I couldn't stop smiling about Cinder's into dorks! Hahha!

I LOVE IT! I WISH THERE WAS MORE!

Excellent one-shot; I loved it. This definitely has potential to become more. I like the JaunexCinder shipping; it's crazy, but then again, anyone paired with the blonde knight is going to have crazy moments.

This could totally become a story where Jaune has to fight his feelings and is all conflicted as his allies fight Cinder and Co.

Nice work: The Atlantean King:

There needs to be more Jaune/Cinder shipping imo. :D

I like it, it has potential for fun in another story.

well... cinder is cinderella, and the question is who's the prince charming?
as much as i can see there's only one

I find this, so numerous that I can see it happening.

Pretty sure if she is posing as a student she is not in cougar territory.

I'm so happy someone finally made a story on this paring. I was going to make a story about it, but I've been busy lately and I haven't come up with any ideas for it. There has been so many match ups for Jaune that I'm surprised no one thought about this. So I thank you for making a story about this pairing. This really made my day.

Nothing like dancing with the enemy to make the perfect night. Nicely done

This is strangely a very interesting concept. I mean like so Jaune has no luck wooing the girls in his school but than BAM Cinder, the hot and smoking evil villainess, comes out and shows interest in him. Than maybe she tempts him to the dark side. How funny that is.