"if you'd just let me kill her like I wanted to, none of this would be happening" omfg i should not have laughed at that

what a brilliant story!

"Emma, he now understood, made him want to be a better man, whereas Milah had encouraged his worst vices." Love this line!

I had to reread this because it's so good and I love it!

Ciao! Volevo tanto lasciare una recensione, anche se probabilmente non conosci l'italiano e mi dispiace scriverti in una lingua che non comprendi, ma non riesco a scrivere recensioni troppo lunghe in inglese (ma ci sto lavorando). Non sono qui per chiederti di continuare la tua storia, ma solo per ringraziarti di averla condivisa con noi. Ho amato ogni singolo capitolo, in alcuni ho inondato la tastiera del computer di lacrime, in altri ho riso, ho odiato (Milah) e mi sono sentita parte di tutto questo. Perciò grazie per tutte le emozioni che mi hai fatto provare e per ogni singola parola scritta da te; non ti conosco, ma mi hai regalato alcuni momenti meravigliosi con il tuo lavoro: non sottovalutare questo potere!
Scusa ancora per l'italiano. Baci :)

Amazing fic! I read it in one sitting when I should of been doing school work, but this was a waaaaay better use of time!

I was desperately asking folks for arranged marriage fics and yours was one I'd kept back for a bit because I saw it was long and I knew I'd need some time to sit down and thoroughly enjoy it. I'm now in a full fit of despair that it's gone unfinished. What's here is utterly charming, angst-ridden, sensual, and amazingly detailed. I'm usually not one for Milah as the villain, but every great story does need a villain and she's made an absolutely stunning one here. The chapter before Killian made the mistake to go break things off cleanly actually made me facepalm and calling him an idiot out loud.

Oh, and the typhoid fever dreams, good Lord that had me in twists. What a heartbreaking chapter.

If you ever felt like tying things up, please know I'm here and wishing I knew how things ended up for these two, though leaving it here does have a bit of a wistful edge to it that things eventually do turn out all right in the end.

Wow, such an incredible story. Excellent.

show must go on !

Poor Emma
She seeks comfort in a woman she believes she can trust only to be fooled and backstabbed.
Milah is a mean heartless bitch
Killian is blind and a scared insecure bastard
I feel for Emma

What about this story? I hope you haven't forgotten it because I certainly haven't and I'm patiently waiting for the next update!

I want to rwad more of your fic but none are finished! Please return and write!

I hope this isn't a forgotten fanfic cause I love this story.. I just wish there's an update soon.. :D

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I was re-reading this story and realized he could certainly have his fantasy from this chapter now!