ADD MORE PLEASE!

Does she give birth

Unreadable, hurts my eys when there is no space between the lines. I mean when one jumps from one section of text, to the other one below.

not half bad i was able to get a good rise out of this and the setting was believable and realistic "as realistic as a dinosaur inducting a human into its pack on a remote island that was a park but was abandoned and taken over by said dinosaurs"

Ahh... bestiality at its finest. Welp, it’s only fiction anyway.

If you ever make a sequel and if you want Alex and check to have babies have Alex figure out how to use the cloning machines

Awe I wanted to see their hatchlings!XD XD XP XP

Sweetie, you have got to separate your info. ..I love the idea, but I can't keep reading because it's just too jumbled! :'(

Well this was interesting.

this is an amazing story hope you make a sequel. and if Alex and check did manage to have some of there young could look like raptors some look human.

Please make another story like this! This is awsome!

Please update or make a sequel i really enjoyed reading this more than i thought i would,
it would be nice to read more of it and see what happens with Alex and Check,
i know it's probably impossible but it would be nice if they could have hatchlings, if she miraculously could lay eggs or something,

it would be interesting to see how they progress from where you left it to the end of the new Jurassic World film timeline, if they are still alive by then.

but really enjoyed this and hope you make more :) you're a great writer

Ummm... I'm pretty sure there were no beats headphones in 1993. They didn't even exist at the time...

can u write more stories like this one?

Cool story! Are you gonna do another one?