This has been a great story. I like how Snape keeps them in line but clearly still loves them. Thank you for writing us.

Very well done!

Loved it

It's a well-written fan fiction. Good idea. interesting dialogues between Harry and Draco. Your characters are absolutely in no character. I won't keep it, it's not mine. But I read it with respect to your letter. It's decent.
I had a psychological conflict throughout yuo work. Your Snape is not the Snape of Canon. I don't understand him as a person. Yes, everything is great, he seems like a nice guy. But! He has no principles! I don't see aspects of his character! In the Canon, he is bitter because of his mistakes. Life isn't fair he says! He is driven by eternal love and a desire for revenge for his life and Lily's life. He's a traumatized person, but he's the right one. And he acts from his own motives and not from the common good. I don't understand your character. He loves Lily so much and he had a chance to have her in his life. And at the same time throws everything as Albus ordered him to arrange his death? He not finds moment that would to share with Lily that he alive. He'd leaked his happiness so easily and hadn't found a loophole to keep Lily to himself? Drives her to despair, but he finds time to wait for Sarah for years. Why hadn't he forgotten Sarah as quickly as he'd forgotten Lily? He saw and talked to her so rarely. After all, when Lily gave birth he did not even let know that he was alive. If he loved Sarah so much,and he loved her more than Lily. Why three years he bullied over Harry in Hogwarts, and so same defended his? After all, if he's involved in a new love, he would not have wanted to serve the memory of Lily and resentment would not be so acute. Snape is in love with another, he has other worries.
Attitude to Harry. You impress Snape as a super psychologist who knows how to raise children. But he finds Harry. Understands, that he betrayed Lily, not Lily Snape's. And he's not trying to mend fences with Harry. He does not rejoice in his son, does not show love and desire to free the child from his injuries, he does not seek intimacy. They seem to coexist with Harry until you get a Draco. And what do we see? It turns out have Snape's with proximity and love to Draco all in order. Snape would never live with James. Although Severus is sure that Harry is obliged to accept Draco as a godson of his father, and like his brother. I understand Draco is in trouble. But when a native child's world turned upside down, his psychological state is fragile somehow it is not necessary to create additional stress for your child. In reading, I expected a lonely period for father-son bonding. But no. I want to see the worry about how Harry will perceive as well as the despair of Snape that he did not have time to be alone with his son. Snape same puts Harry before fact. Although he had to differentiate between guys and to everyone to explain my role in his life. Draco was the godson and he would have been fine in that position. And Harry would have taken his role as a son with a Bang. Harry only gained family, Draco had Snape's a long time. And me painful for for your Harry and I understand his fear and desires not nuzhnosti. And Snape all makes for this. I love fan fiction where Snape clearly communicates thought until Draco, that Harry his son. And Harry will always be closer than Draco, but Snape so same likes Draco as his godson. And then this picture plays like in real life. It's embarrassing for me. It looks like Snape forces Harry to come to terms with the choice of Snape, and that Harry will never be more than Draco. That's bullshit. As you say blood is thicker than water. And attitude Snape's to Draco should be as to godson, Ah this quite the other level of sensual and psychological perception. And to level the boys up is very absurd. Your Harry in a huge disadvantage in this story and even with an amulet of the heir. Snape again was surprised. Snape had not to explain to Harry about his relationship with Sarah. Whi? As an adult he had to understand how Harry psychologically it's hard. He had to prepare the child. His son sees his mother's death in a dream. But again, Snape puts Harry before the fact. I absolutely do not understand how your Harry swallows all of it and not rebel. And adolescence is a time of resentment and rebellion. And not blind love as have Harry and to Draco and to Sarah. And all that makes Snape this punishes and says you my son and Draco, too,.
Relisticly you have is the rivalry between Harry and Draco. And Draco's suffering because of his parents.
Well, That's just my opinion. I recommend your work for reading. Am asking you add in table of contents to your heroes Draco and point to couple of Snape/ a new blockbuster. Thank you for the good time spending with your fanfic!

Love it

Many Thanks for this intriguing story. I'm pleased to see that there are several sequels just waiting to be read.

Yes the only way to make it easier is if Harry was old and senile

This one almost made me cry tears of happiness. Good job.

LOVE YOUR STORY!

I read this before so I had to yell (in real life) at Harry for him not to do it and my dad was very concerned. I love the fanfic by the way.

OOOOHHHHHH! VERNON GOT IS GONNA GET HIS A** BEAT!

ooooooooooooo!LEAVE HIM HARRY! HE NEEDS HELP!

Eh. I'd trust Petunia with a dog.

I've tried reading this story, managed until chapter 17, and although it's well written, hitting a child, no matter what they've done, can't be justified!

Snape hitting not only Harry, but Draco, too, who was not even his own child the first time, makes me sick! You just can't justify something like this!

At first I didn't want to leave a review, if I don't like a story, I just leave it...but your story makes it sound like spanking or hitting a child with a spoon it's okay and IT IS NOT!

I feel sorry for those two boys and that I begun reading this story...can't believe the positive reviews!

I can't fine the special help!