| Reviews for The Devil Within |
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FIREmizuchi chapter 12 . 5/30/2018 God this story is gold |
peinisimo chapter 1 . 1/1/2018 Plz update. I love it |
ItzIzziieMonsta chapter 7 . 11/29/2017 You know, I would LOVE to see what’s happened between River, Rebekah and Niklaus |
Adahmel chapter 6 . 11/21/2017 You don't knot a saddle, you tie a girth. There is nothing to knot a saddle to. The thick padded blanket is either called a saddle cloth or a numnah. Things that are easily googled. It does tend to spoil a otherwise well written story. |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/26/2017 Please write more |
poukie-scrapbook chapter 11 . 2/13/2017 This is so unexpected ! Alisia was only thinking about surviving this familly and now she make a vow, what a drastic turn. Just to say i love your story and i look forward to see the extension of her new statue (and maybe her meeting with Elijah). I'll can't wait your next chapter ! XX |
ravenblack121 chapter 1 . 4/30/2016 i am truly enamoured with this story, can't wait for next chapter. |
knuffelmuff chapter 11 . 2/13/2016 I have no idea how you will ever bring her into a relationship with Klaus, Kol and Elijah. Also, I tend to forget that she's nine years old. And I strongly believe there was no liquid soap in 1076 |
NatalieLynn chapter 11 . 2/11/2016 Great story so far! I'm anxious to see what will happen next and look forward to reading more. |
Sesshomaru8282 chapter 11 . 12/17/2015 Hmmmmm! |
lokidoki9 chapter 11 . 12/11/2015 This story is awesome! I really like how different it is to the other ones I have read :) One question though...does Ali now completely have her powers? Or can they be blocked again? Keep up the good work! :D |
Aiphira chapter 10 . 12/4/2015 Her father? What?! Oh, sh*t, next chapter will be interesting to read, to say the least! And, yeah, I get your point - I can see her manipulating Gertrude like that. But with the resent development (her rage), I can already see her losing her cool and just lashing out at Gertrude. ;D |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/22/2015 Oh my god! That's so bad! Hope she she finds a way to get revenge on Gertrude! Please update soon, love this story :) |
Aiphira chapter 9 . 11/19/2015 Awesome! Loved it, as always. However, it would be interesting to see her getting a back-bone or something, I guess. Not against Niklaus or Rebekah, but against Gertrude, for example. Or lash out at someone, you know? Having been in such an enviroment for so long and thinking of only survival, while being in the company of Niklaus and his temper/anger, it would be interesting to see her lash out or snap or something, you know? :) Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/27/2015 Love the story. Like that the oc can draw and write poetry :) |