Wow. That had to be one of the most beautiful things I have ever read...stalking you now.

Beautiful, aching and very emotional and touching. You used present tense, which I always find very fitting for a story in which Haru is the main character. You really managed to re-create that movie-like quietness- that way that Haru doesn't speak, but his eyes say everything. Thank you for this!

Wow, just wow. That was so viscerally painful, so well written. I loved this. Well done! Now if I can just remember how to breathe again...

OMG the final part was sky touching! Gosh, I love it TTuTT They are finally free! They can only be free with each other. I love those two! *A* So fucking adorable! *sniff sniff*
Ahahahahahahahahah OMG Nagisa is AMAZING! Ahahah xD Perfect work, Blondie xD And Rei did well too! He manage to avoid Haru and not tell anything! :D Hurraaaaay \o/
I really liked this story! You made an awesome job! :3
Take care!
Kissuuuuus

OMFG! YOU DO NOT UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS! IT WAS SO GREAT THAT I HAVE TO WRITE THIS WHOLE REVIEW IN CAPS TO GET MY POINT ACROSS! I LOVE YOU FOR THIS! (I also may or may not have cried my eyes out at a few parts)

Oh my god. I LOVE your writing style! It's so vivid and emotional and beautiful! I can literally feel every emotion because of hiw amazing this is. Dont ever stop writing. Ever.

Beautiful. So beautiful, and so much like them. :)

This was perfect ;-; I loved every bit of it!

"(...) Rin demanding an answer that's more intrinsic than it is deliberate, something that's entrenched so deeply and so inexorably into what he feels for Rin that it's impossible to put into words without unraveling eight years of wonderful, disastrous longing."

Wow, this was beautiful, I just loved it. The way you write, how you describe the moment, the little details, what Haru is feeling. You really can feel how in love he is with Rin and his longing, everything is so bittersweet. And from Haru's pov you also can see how in love is Rin too.

I like you respected Haru's and Makoto's dynamic, I like that most HaruRin fics really do this, but you made it really nice.

This is beautiful. It's delicate and gentle and beautiful. I love that nothing's overdone - just the quiet build up of emotions, the subtle gestures and flashes of emotion. I love it.

Beautiful piece! Well done! I loved your portrayal of the characters here, especially the unspokeness of Haru and Makoto's friendship. And the little 'Yeah I'm still making the fucking tea, Haru' made me laugh out loud. Thank you for sharing! :)