The writing feels weird to read and idk how I feel about naruto being able to give others chakra story seems ok will have to read more

is that a cannon way to break the oaths? If so I didn't know that so you learned something new every day I guess.

First chapter already makes me not want to read, like honestly they betrayed him the biju, lock him up for three years and he’s just lost the bijuu who are pretty much his only friends but still doesn’t want to kill Sasuke even while they’re trying to kill him?

Hope its continued soon

idk why but i remember this story being a lot better than what it is now

minor thing, but try use commas, this story is severely lacking in dee punctuation department

I love the story very much

These chapters that have little to no naruto are really boring. I like thalia and all but they are boring.

Ya se que es un cazo perdido, pero yo aun tengo esperanza, de que volverás, aunque hoy en día, esa esperanza es mas pequeña, (TT_TT) tu historias son geniales y de echo, yo te encontré por este fic. se que ya ha pasado tiempo pero podrías continuar, no importa si es un capitulo al año. por favor.
traducción nivel novato.
I know it is a lost pot, but I still have hope, that you will return, although today, that hope is smaller, (TT_TT) your stories are great and in fact, I found you by this fic. I know it's been a while but you could continue, no matter if it's a chapter a year. please.

This story is just amazing. I hope to see it finalized and enjoy it in its entirety.

De acuerdo me gusta esperaré avisa los que siguen siguen tus historias Y gracias olvides No te olvides de este pobre que te sigue yo veo el historial bien a mi ver Ya mi oído no encuentro ninguna molestia la trama está al 100 de 100 y gracias continuará por favor

Gracias por hacer esta maravillosa historia por el lapso de tiempo que ha llegado a lela apenas estoy iniciando yo pero te doy las merecidas gracias Por hacerlo

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muitooooo boooom

The 'OP'ness of this Naruto, as well as the lack of really well worked dialogue or plot devices really hurt this first chapter for me. Nevertheless, I will read on!