Ok, so one, protective Jack is adorable.
Two: "He blinked, avoiding the lascivious comment that chirped up in his mind (in Jack's voice)" I'm not the only one? Oh thank goodness, so it's not weird that any suggestive thoughts, or comment or innuendos I think are thought in Jack's voice?
And finally three, this is brilliant.

Can I just say that I loved this! It was too cute and lovavle. I could read a 50 chapter fic about these two going through life! Also majestic golden unicorn is where it's at!

-Fangirl17

Sooooo cute! Egads, I'm dying. Delightful, and fantastic Jack on top of it all. Marvelous.

LOL loved this!

Very romantic and in character.

Your stories are always so amazing! Thanks so much!

This, especially this last chapter totally made my day! It really did suck (my day not your story which was awesome!) until now. Now I've read this fanfiction and had rather a good laugh and you really did just make my day a little bit bstter! Thanks.

Very smutty.

Well, I just read through this whole chapter thinking you had certainly jumped right into things and enjoyed it nonetheless before realizing this is Chapter 4, and I haven't read 1-3. Whomp. The dangers of not paying attention to an author notification.

That said, I'm going to go back and read it from the beginning. I haven't watched any of actual Eight, and I probably wouldn't have read this story otherwise, so I guess it all worked out lol.

I giggled through the majority of this chapter thank you I started the morning with a smile

Majestic golden unicorns? Seriously?
I take it there is more to this story and I quite like Rose and Eight so that is very nice indeed.
And so my 'majestic golden unicorn', the only question I have left is when will you grace us with another Shades chappie?

LOL that was lovely!

Very nicely done. :)

lovely...wonderfully written...Jack condoms was a nice touch.

I love your stories with Eight and Rose. I also appreciate all of the movie/tv references. :-)