that was an amazing read! At first I was hesitant because I don't usually read incest fics, but this was so lovely done that I couldn't stop reading. 3

I love this fic so much, you can write more of them.
P/s: I want to translate it into Vietnamese. Can you give me permission to translate it. Thank you so much and sorry for my bad English. I hope you get what I mean.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, the story was great, it was exceptionally well written and it was clear you put a lot of work and research into it. I'm really glad I found this story. Keep up the good work! :)

yay, this story is freaking fantastic :D You did fool me with Haythams death tho... Got quite angry there for a while, hehe... But of course that bastard would have a trick up his sleeve ;) Great work! Hope you continue writing more like this hehe :D

hehe _
that was a pretty great story!
I really liked it!
And I am so glad that he turned out alive :')
It was an awesome story!
The end was hilarious!

Well.. thats are pretty bad point to stop D:
Oh man.. Haytham is dead and Connor is nearly..
I am interesting how the story is going to end!
Well, sad that it is going to end so soon..
However, it was hilarious! *U*
I love that story!
Looking foward to the next chapters ;)

O.O
Well, that one really got me . Poor Haytham.. Poor Ratonhnhaké:ton..
That chapter was short but it was awesome **
Well, Haytham is screwed..
GO CONNOR! KILL CHARLES LEE (and Reginald Birch)!
Well.. I am soooooo looking forward to the next chapi _
I wanna know whats going on!
Well.. damn.. O.O

O.O
OMG!
How could you do that? T_T
They will kill each other u.u
*trembling*
Alright.. That really got me. So, I am looking forward to the next chapi _"
Ok, I have to still for a minute and..
Well, I am glad to know now why Connor is like that..

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
I know you would do it *_*
Njaaaaaaaaaaa CONNOR! Do not die!
That chapter was awesome!
I had nearly known it that Connor would be the one to be captured xD
Sooooo.. When 'he' came back I was just like Wut? Wasn't he captured? O.o
I have not even recognized the dad XD
Greatfully Haytham did :3
Soooo, I am looking forward to see what is going to happen next *U*
BTW.. maybe I am stupid or something like that.. but.. what did they do to Connor? O.o

interesting fic despite the haythcon.

would be interesting to see you work in the animal powers

hellooooooo *u*
So. I love that chapter!
And I finally got my smut _ *being happy*
It was cute when Haytham was always around Connor xD
Though I have to tell - it did not fit him :D
I am looking forward for the next chapter! Hopefully Connor will be able to kill Charles Lee *u*
Would be fun to see _

hey there..
I remembered that I had not read the new chapter and was just like OMG I have to READ IT!
.. .. .. ..
You are cruel :c
OMG - you made me CRY! There were fuckin tears running down my cheeks! I just hope that my sister have not recognized it O.o *looking to her, watching her playing 'sims'*
You was right! That chapter really got me!
First I was like, Oh, Haytham and Zio, happyness and more being happy and perfect like, and so on. And then.. OMG! You really so got me with that.
Poor little Ratonhnhaké:ton.. Poor Haytham.. Oh dear, you got me crying.. *sniffle*
Awesome chapter - and the end of it was just so cute _
Go on! I love this!

hy :)
and OMG! What is going to happen now? I have the bad feeling that things will get bad..
Really, Really bad..
But it was an awesome chapter, it really was!
I am so looking forward what will happen now!
Does it still stand? That smut scenes you said that will happen? *U* I hope so!
It was interesting to meet that guy.. I did not like him.
You know what would have been interesting? When he took Connor as slave and Haytham had to rescue him xD
Would be fun! So, I am so freaking curious about what will happen next!

kind regards

hy there :)
and - ooooown: The last sentence was just so incredible cute!
I have to say: You surprised me with that chapter. But it was a good surprise!
So, everything is gonna be alright and Shay will look after Connors crew :3
It was so Connor, I had so known it when he jumped right into the arms of that slavesman.
And I was something like.. proud of him - as we see: 'normal' people just pass and do not care.
So! Cheers for Connor!
I kind of felt it that something is going to happen when they both take down their clothes xD It was cute - and hot *u*
All in all it was an awesome chapter and I am so looking forward what is going to happen next!

I love the way you put such emotion in your writing! Seriously, I swear I could feel Connor's anger and frustration, and the tense atmosphere between Shay and Haytham after Connor ran off. You're /really/ good at sending feeling through words. c:
This isn't like my 'usual' review, but I wanted to tell you 'bout your skills!
Hiding behind some Christmas tree (or in a box of decorations),
Kraehenhexe