You made this story a... holy smokes. My brain is blown.

Please oh please, continue it!

So am I correct in assuming that will be the last chapter?

Wow. This is a very interesting backstory for the Cybertronian race. I already see similarities between these thirteen and the thirteen...primes... Ah. I see what you did.

Ooooooh, things are getting really interesting. That last part about there being 13 of them wouldn't have anything to do with the original 13 Primes, would it?

The 13 primes. NICE

Ha! I see what you've done! Great job!

Oh ho... This is really getting interesting now.

Finally! I was waiting for some kind of hint to Cybertronians. I was honestly going to dismiss this story for not having any transformers, but you've reignited my interest :).

Ooooooh, things are picking up. I have a vague theory of where this is going but you continue to surprise me, so I'll just have to wait and see. :)

Your alive! Wow. I missed you and your story! Though, this chapter raises more questions than answers :P. Gotta give you credit for finding legit facts for your stuff (not many authors do that). Please update when you can. If your too busy, your too busy. Don't kill yourself to write a story ;).

You really are a tease, aren't you? Yet another chapter, but the revelations are still far out of reach. Now I'm curious about that ghost. Maybe it's the saboteur, who's faked his own death? The medic certainly saw someone he knew. Or maybe the ghost is some form of 'Primus activity', trying to communicate with them? Or maybe Primus is more interested in talking to the ship itself.

Cybertron! Wow I'm so excited for them going :). I think that Mack had something to do with that engine and also the second in command (I keep forgetting how his name is spelled). I'm probably wrong, but I also think that Primus caused that engine to fail. Anyway, update whenever you can! Can't wait for the next chapter ;).

Awe. Some. I can't wait till they get to Cybertron. Oh, what a surprise they are in! The Civil war should have started already or is about to start if my calculations are correct based on the crews time period. Just hope they can land the ship properly.

Do you read More than Meets The Eye comics? Some of the characters remind me of transformers. Are you doing this on purpose? Lol I ask too many questions.

I feel like your foreshadowing something. I just don't know what. Lol cool chapter. I wonder how this all plays into Transformers. Maybe they run into Cybertron? I really have no idea.