Reviews for In the Light of Darkness |
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Rosequartz chapter 5 . 5/21/2017 PLEASE continue this! |
The-Ghost-In-The-Roses chapter 5 . 7/24/2015 I have no reaction |
MasterDarkElf chapter 5 . 11/30/2014 Interesting |
melody-monster chapter 5 . 10/30/2014 this is amazing, cant wait for the next chapter. and if you like fnaf rp's im free to do one if you have skyp. skype name is: 9 (melody the halloween monster) |
thecrazyblackcat chapter 2 . 10/18/2014 I knew the cupcake was evil, it was too creepy and innocent looking, to not be suspicious. I like where this is going. :) -thecrazyblackcat |
WolvesMercy chapter 5 . 10/17/2014 I like this. Please make more. |
KyeShepherd chapter 5 . 10/14/2014 I've only just gotten into reading all of these and this is one of the best I've come across. The basis is so plausible without going over the top. I really hope to see more from you, I'd hate to see this end so abruptly. |
Cenobia100 chapter 5 . 9/27/2014 Loving the story, not loving Daniel though :/ Not a very impressive OC, and it kinda destroyed the flow of the story, breaking from the Fazbear crew so quickly. |
Eclipse1 chapter 5 . 9/21/2014 Must see more. Now I really want to see a foxy x Michael. |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/19/2014 Aw! I hope Daniel helps Mike though! I cant wait omfglove this fic |
hawthornethefoxking chapter 5 . 9/19/2014 I feel bad for saying this but I now so badly want Foxy x Mike because it'd be too freaking cute. 3 |
XxLuciixX chapter 4 . 9/19/2014 I recently read this one my phone and I love how Mike and the Animatronics are now working together! I loved the part where they hugged! I feel bad for Foxy, I think he's jealous, he's so caring to Mike! Oh! I just noticed a new chapter! WOW! Fast update! :D Yay! |
Purest of the Hearts chapter 5 . 9/19/2014 *winces* I understand their reasoning now...And Daniel. Maybe he could escape one day... |
SilhouetteSeeker chapter 4 . 9/17/2014 Well, so far I like it. The writing style is a bit confusing at times though. I suggest you start another paragraph each time a new character starts talking/has a perspective or a new scene, etc occurs. Even if its just a single liner with a tiny amount of imagery. Otherwise it's confusing as to who exactly is talking or thinking. Other than that I do really like the plot. However I sense there will be romance of some kind? I can't be sure. Unfortunately if that is part of the future plot I may discontinue reading. I'm really sorry orz 3: |
Happy Reader chapter 4 . 9/14/2014 Please update soon! I'm really liking where this is going! |