| Reviews for Maximum Ride: The Life of High School |
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xAyeeCassidy chapter 1 . 6/19/2017 UPDATE! |
MickLovesAnimeAndSherlock chapter 3 . 3/29/2017 A Sw |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 1/3/2017 Update soon please, or can you at least write an A/N saying whether or not you plan on continuing this story? Thanks! |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 12/10/2016 UPDATE PLEASEEEEE |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 11/6/2016 UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
Guest chapter 18 . 9/21/2016 Please write mor wthis is an amazing story |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 7/25/2016 Lol last thing sorry, you really should finish your story Maximum Ride: Abusive Love, and not make it a oneshot. I'm not the only one who thinks so, btw ;) |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 7/21/2016 Also, shouldn't you include Dylan more in the story? In the chapter where Fang and Max went out on their date because Max lost a bet, Fang said Sam wants to take advantage of her beauty, Dylan's desperate for a relationship, and Fang actually loves her. Then, you did the scene where Sam attempted rape causing Fang to get injured. You focused a major scene on Sam, but the only thing you did with Dylan was that she borrowed his clothes in the hospital. I understand Max and Fang are in a relationship but I still feel like you should include him in another major scene, too. Like maybe he does something with Max causing Fang to get jealous? I don't know. Also, after the date scene, Brigid wasn't mentioned anymore. After Lissa getting rejected by Fang after asking him to the dance, she's not mentioned again. Almost none of the characters are. I really like your story, honestly, it's my favorite one out there; I'm sorry if you feel like I'm sounding rude or anything like that, I don't mean it. But they're just a few things I remembered when I was rereading the story. You don't have to change anything at all though, it's perfect the way it is. They're just a couple of suggestions I had. Thanks though. UPDATE SOON! |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 7/16/2016 I just remembered, there was supposed to be a dance, right? In the first few chapter when Fang went to the hospital, Lissa, Max, and Fang were talking about the dance. Lissa had asked Fang, but Fang said that Max is taking him instead. Do you know if you're still going to include the dance in this story? |
Guest chapter 18 . 7/15/2016 honestly i love this ff :) but where did maya go in this chapter? Anyways super cute! |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 7/14/2016 I just finished the chapter. Right now, I hate you and I love you. I love you for updating, duh, and I hate you for having to end it in 3-4 chapters. Like whyyyyyy. There's not enough fax ;-; But at least there's going to be a sequel! :D Can you actually make sure you update the sequel once you start it (not in a rude way). Most people start a sequel and like 3 chapters in, they just stop updating without even saying anything about being busy, or losing their motivation or passion, or anything at all. But once again, thanks so much for updating. This is honestly my favorite fanfiction that I'm actually checking every second of everyday to see if you updated it yet or not. So thank you so much. |
xAyeeCassidy chapter 18 . 7/14/2016 I forgot my pass.. oops.. anyways.. I DIDNT READ IT YET BUT THANKS SOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING AGAIN :D |
Celestial Flame Fairy chapter 18 . 7/16/2016 wahhh so cuteee |
IGGY'S BAE chapter 1 . 7/11/2016 lol |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/6/2016 When r u gonna update |