I really like this story but there’s a lot of inconsistencies. Like they talk about Annabeth’s mom and how she doesn’t get along with Percy and then in the next chapter, the mortals have no idea she was in contact with her mother. This chapter, they are acting like they had no clue that Rachel was into Percy but they’ve known that since she visited. It’s still a good story but you should watch out that you don’t reveal info twice.

WHY DO YOU DO DIS TO ME why not percabeth :(

i feel bad

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Well there goes my hopes. I really enjoy heart breakers!

Perfecto

YAYYYY

I don't think Annabeth would say shut up to the gods, because Rick Riordan never hinted she had a death wish.

I think it's rude whenever a boy calls a woman "his". sorry, maybe that's just me

another has turned to the dark side

You're lucky if you date a child of Aphrodite cause if you treat them right Aphrodite might give you a good love life. Or she could make her child break up with you

COOL

Ah, yes. I know why Claire got a glint in her eye. Maybe, it's because she's A FRICKIN CHILD OF APHRODITE. ok, well Ben didn't know that so I guess I have no right

How's that for friends forever

How was Claire so calm?