love the story hope for more...

OMG this is awesome! It did feel rushed, bt I still enjoyed it! Keep writing!
Thanks for the fic!

" where they won't ever let him leave their sight again."
Hihi, I sugest that laxus sleeps in the same bed as Freed or Else he'll leave their sight again (and that'll create the yaoi I need)

Good story. I agree Author-Chan. Injuries, not torture, is how you (and the magic council) should go and the magic council is the magic council! They would not want to go too far by doing something like torture because too much torture could kill Freed. Love the story, I kind of want another chapter where Freed is in the Gould's infirmary and FRAXUS happens! Yeah, like you, Fraxus is everything to me. It is the only thing I ship and I ship it with everything I've got.

I dont understand what they did with the water, but I really liked your story 3 i thought it was pretty good, although it mightve been better i admit, but as a student in a film school, i always know that a story could always be better, so no worries. I thought it was really cool, i always feel pumped up when it comes to fairy tail's heart and will always help each other out 3

So crazy short! It's good but short! I want more! I want major Fairy Tail freak the hey out rescue! I want lightning bolts and swords and fire and screaming frog rune knight dudes and Freed's daring escape! Arrggh! To little for an insanely overactive imagination!

I thought this was great! For some reason, I like it when someone saves freed (dosnt have to be laxus) from pain and suffering.
I loved it!

Omg! I loved it!