| Reviews for If Only For One Night |
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Guest chapter 8 . 1/12 la suite de si seulement pour une nuit |
marmag1 chapter 8 . 6/24/2019 KYYAAAAAAAAA! |
Karuyuki chapter 8 . 5/1/2019 Love this Story! |
Tee chapter 8 . 4/13/2018 I wish that Naruto would have Named one of them after his parents as well, because all his children seems to take most of Sasuke's traits. Anyway, thanks for the story. |
Angel-the-hedge chapter 8 . 4/12/2018 I loved it! Great job |
Isshiki Satoshi chapter 1 . 9/10/2017 Porcelain God...that made me crack up so hard that my mum's like looking suspiciously... |
Yuri Namikaze1 chapter 5 . 8/10/2017 I don't like Sakura, but I hate when other characters become OOC just to bash her. If you don't like her, just don't write about her. It's really easy to just say something like, she's working in the hospital or off on a medical mission. The fact that Tsunade slapped her like that was totally uncalled for, and honestly, it made Tsunade look horrible. And then when Naruto said that sly comment to Sakura about Sasuke, totally OOC and rude af. Then he goes and cries about the situation, him having to come out, and people asking about the father. It makes me feel like he's the kind of person who only cares about his problems and his feelings. Like his feelings matter, but Sakura's doesn't? Anyway, the story is really great except for those kinds of parts. I hope they're over now though since you said you hoped people got their fill. |
Jissy2013 chapter 8 . 6/25/2017 Love it so sweet |
Angel-the-hedge chapter 9 . 6/22/2017 I'm happy you're bac |
Arw165 chapter 8 . 2/7/2017 I don't exactly understand, why they sealed Kurama inside Sayuri. The seal weakens during labor, but Kushina had some "help" from Obito to make it happen, so why would Kyuubi even leave his original host, when there were people specialized in fuuinjutsu for safety measures? As far as I'm concerned, that's risking Naruto's life for nothing. Kushina survived the extraction somehow, but there was no telling, if it wouldn't kill Naruto. And even if they had good relations with Kurama, I still wouldn't want my baby to be jinchuuriki (Kushina was devastated for once). It's a heavy burden, Naruto knows it ad there always will be people, who will be prejudiced. What jutsu did Jiraiya use to seal Kyuubi? I mean, Minato died doing that (using his jutsu). You made it seem a little bit to easy. You gave a warning for OOC, so I don't know what to say about Sakura. Many writers use that for their sakura!bashing-fest to make her look as evil and stupid as possible. That doesn't make her look bad IMO, makes the story loose on quality instead. Well, whether she would use untested jutsu on someone she cares about (technique she doesn't know how works) - would she do it to hurt? I remember her doing many ridiculous things, but not out of spite. At the same Sasuke is perfect and forgiven, nobody conveniently mentioned him piercing Naruto with Chidori for example (unless there was some AU warning and it was not how things went down), which qualifies as murder attempt. Sakura tries to mention the guy's not all that innocent and gets slapped in the face, because "He had his reasons! He's just misunderstood.". Kakashi thinks it all amusing for some reason o.o |
Secret Ritsuka chapter 8 . 12/28/2016 Well, I think that's the longest fanfiction I've read all these years! Haha it's hard to find ones that keep me interested - so well done you! I've been toying with the idea of writing an MPREG for a while, and I think I'm finally inspired! Not badly written, and nicely rounded to boot. Cookies for you! ~ |
Tee chapter 8 . 12/27/2016 Just reread this story since I wasn't sure if I read or not but I did, and I still find it to be cute. |
Starrynhite chapter 8 . 11/6/2016 I just read your story for the first time. It's hard to find mpreg stories, and even harder to find them done well (in my opinion) and I loved this one! |
Idon'tknow chapter 8 . 8/5/2016 Ha ha July 23 is sasuke's birthday |
Justus chapter 8 . 5/16/2016 I love it! |