Reviews for The Broken Maidenhood
Callum Runchman chapter 20 . 7/28
I'm not really sure what to think about this. Like Artemis deserved far worse than what she got and there are a lot of contradictions in this story but I find it very hard to believe everyone would hate Percy no matter who his father was. The obvious ones would be Artemis, Zeus, Poseidon (for his hatred of his disgrace of a son), Hera (because not only is he a demigod (all of which she hates) but a illegitimate forbidden child of the virgin goddess daughter of her husband Zeus). Other than them and maybe Apollo in the short term none of the others have any reason to hate or even dislike Percy. Yes the hunters were vile but Athena would likely have not hated him and could have helped him out a bit, Hermes definitely would have helped him no matter the consequences, Hephestus would have been able to understand and would have been compassionate to him and Hestia wouldn't have just sat back and watched, considering she lost her seat to save him she would likely continue to protect the being she sacraficed so much for. Hades would have no doubt felt pitty towards Percy as he to was turned on, betrayed and hurt by his own family. All of these major gods would have definitely stepped in despite the reactions that would have happened because of it. Heck even the fates themselves wouldn't be so cruel as to torture a mortal for over 2000 years
Mkhwaja chapter 20 . 7/19
I'm really sad this got discontinued. It was a great and original story.
sparta chapter 20 . 7/7
I wholeheartedly understand. half the time i don't post stories because I know people will pressure me.
boi chapter 18 . 7/7
Wait, that means that there's still a 0.1% chance it's not who i think. that means... It's anyone but Hestia! I say with a proud smile on my face.
OneDocToHealThemAll chapter 20 . 6/22
Great story, please update
AlEmily360 chapter 20 . 5/15
I am sorry but I have to say this... I am a little confused. Okay, more than a little confused. This is what happens in the story from my point of view. Percy is born because Artemis, aka his mom, made a mistake. So somehow they turn him to immortal and he is abused by the hunt. He ran away to Camp Half-blood where he meets Luke. They join Kronos together. But when Percy is down in Tartarus getting the body of Kronos, he meets Nyx. Nyx then asks Percy to join her and he accepts. He then got adopted by Nyx. Apollo joined him as well leaving the world in internal darkness...I think. Then Percy explodes Mount St Helen and he got to Delos where he meets his Grandmother Leto. (Am I getting them right so far?) Then, Percy saw Artemis, aka his mom, and she apologizes to him. If it was me, I would have accepted it... I think. Anyways, so then Percy is like "I don't accept the apologies" so Artemis turn around and was about to walk away when Percy stab her and she died. Hestia was somehow there as well. Phew... after all of that, I have a question. How is this a perstia story? From what I read so far Percy don't like Hestia!
nathan.vuong.5 chapter 19 . 5/12
Mc is a edgy pussy pos. Can't get anything accomplished, gives in when people throw him a sad face, weak, manipulated. Just a bad fanfic
Guest chapter 20 . 5/1
Upadate
AlEmily360 chapter 9 . 4/1
it remind me of the song walk away
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 20 . 3/28
Pls make more this is great!
NormShep chapter 20 . 3/22
Well nice work, I hope you come back for resume this fiction
FriggleBerry chapter 8 . 2/13
If this is THE darkness this story went from like 7/10 to 9/10 ez
FanFictionman43 chapter 14 . 12/9/2019
Lol, Perseus really saved her ass from Hercules and she turned into a bitch. That flashback makes Zoe look like an even bigger dick than before.
PrehistoriCreatorNP chapter 20 . 7/27/2019
God Dammit More!
Guest chapter 20 . 7/16/2019
Bruh the one thing I wanna say is the atomic bombs didn't kill millions in the blasts, only hundreds of thousands. Honestly a lot less people died than the alternative.
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