Reviews for The Tale Of Heavy Weight
Cheshire shadow chapter 29 . 5/5/2017
wow, that's awesome. he became an alicorn and defeated twilight's last stand. hopefully he can heal his sight from that eye, although either way he'll probably have a massive scar...Dokken breaking the chains should be his theme song. if he keeps his vengeance and hate for celestia and nightmare moon comes at the same time...and they team together, with him making a much stronger cursed book that drives users mad, he'll be unstoppable. if he goes through time and meets star swirl for an ultimate team up for an ultimate move that'd be really cool.
Cheshire shadow chapter 25 . 5/4/2017
i guess it's convenient for him not to mention he had dark on the ground crippled and technically executed him...and threw the body really really far...
Cheshire shadow chapter 22 . 5/4/2017
this is definitely going to be awkward when he meets shining in his new role...i wonder if twilight knows it's him? hopefully he doesn't get in trouble for a past self defense and then some killing...
Cheshire shadow chapter 20 . 5/3/2017
this will be awkward for them if shining reveals he killed a certain someone...
Cheshire shadow chapter 19 . 5/3/2017
hopefully the book was destroyed...or he has a failsafe. magical encryption would be perfect...
Cheshire shadow chapter 15 . 5/3/2017
uh oh...will shining spill to the princesses or will he be too scared? and how will this affect his relationships with the princesses and twilight...
Cheshire shadow chapter 14 . 5/3/2017
hopefully for dark's sake it wasn't him who caused the cancer...
Cheshire shadow chapter 13 . 5/3/2017
uh oh...hopefully he doesn't go scarlet witch and explode the hospital in grief by accident...or look up a dark magic spell to raise her back...
Cheshire shadow chapter 12 . 5/3/2017
uh oh...hopefully they can get some deadpool level healing magic
Cheshire shadow chapter 10 . 5/3/2017
at least he didn't knock her from her future spot...or the element of magic.
Cheshire shadow chapter 9 . 5/3/2017
hopefully he can explain his one...and create a mega heal spell. at least 2 major people need it...
Cheshire shadow chapter 7 . 5/2/2017
ouch. he's blown up a school, and his mom has cancer?
Cheshire shadow chapter 6 . 5/2/2017
i think he might get asked about the mountain that exploded...and possibly start suffering soon.
Cheshire shadow chapter 5 . 5/2/2017
looks like that enhancement spell might be needed. hopefully he has a healing spell and/or a death warding spell because his mother doesn't look so well...
Cheshire shadow chapter 4 . 5/2/2017
but wouldn't the one who tried to kill him get in trouble? especially since it ended up nearly killing the teacher. ironic he met young shining armor and twilight...
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