| Reviews for When You Were Young |
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   HunnyDreams42 chapter 39 . 7/14 I really enjoyed this story, I didn't think I would because the talking the characters do is not written in parentheses like they normally should be, I can't lie I do think your story would benefit by editing the talking into parentheses. But I am glad I continued reading despite it because this was a wonderful story that takes a different spin on the whole time travel trope (which in and of itself I just love lol). Caroline not being able to hold back telling Esther and Mikael off is a whole mood jk I was so happy to see her defend Klaus. In the show I don't care to much for Elena she's not my favorite character but I've noticed that fanfiction stories like yours make her far more likeable and tolerable, authors like you actually make Elena's character the way the writers try to perceive her to be in the show but they fail spectacularly whereas authors like you succeed in bringing Elena's character traits like selfless, compassionate, forgiving, kind, etc to light. I really loved your story and I especially loved the Klaus and Caroline scenes and that they got their happy ending lol thank you for sharing your story :) |
| amcke1991 chapter 39 . 7/10 This was beautiful and the perfect ending |
| Ninahk chapter 7 . 5/25 The little hut thing was absolutely hilarious I’ve read stories so far on the time travel stuff but yours is the best bc u represent how they loved back then so well can’t wait to keep reading! |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 26 . 12/17/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| Kayla's boyfrien chapter 37 . 10/24/2019 U little bitch leave !my gf alone I'll blow u to peaces |
| Danielle Grayson chapter 1 . 10/5/2019 I would recommend not using dashes when people speak. It is traditional to use “” when people speak instead |
| Jezidca chapter 21 . 9/13/2019 Love the names for the babies. It is so fittting |
| Guest chapter 39 . 6/26/2019 This is best fanfiction Ever |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2019 Such a wonderful story, amazing job! |
| LucyHeartFeelMeUp chapter 22 . 11/21/2018 why can't Elena go back while she's pregnant she isn't a vampire yet so wouldn't she be able to safely carry the baby? |
| lustofavampire chapter 39 . 5/14/2017 like |
| Guest chapter 39 . 4/30/2017 Love love loved this story |
| Pam chapter 1 . 2/24/2017 Just happen to fine this story love it |
| klaroline and Jemi chapter 32 . 9/3/2016 love uncle Kol |
| jenovadeathspecimen chapter 11 . 6/28/2016 I'm enjoying this I hope they stay in the past at least till they turn or henrik dies I'm interested to see how they deal with it will they try to prevent it or no |
