I'm saving this fanfic, one of my favorites I love how you actuallu write the effect the abuse had on Ven. I love how loving Terraqua is to Ven. This was such a rollercoaster from me being so soft one second and then I just got hit by all the angst. This is very well written, thank you for writing this!

I tell you, this is a very cute and good story.
With a story like this, is so easy make a mistakes, but you are doing It great. Slow burn is always the most smart move with a story so complicated to do.
Take care of yourself, and I hope I could read an actualitation sometime of this fic.
PD: I'm sorry for my bad english

By the Madness and Chaos, my heart is ripping for this version of Ven. I would gut Xehanort like a stuck fat pig for this if I met him. This is HORRIFIC mental trauma. Your story is beautifully done though, Momma Aqua is the envy of all Momma Bear candidates. Ghost Drive Command Style and her Lightbloom shotlock like crazy on who hurts her baby.

Please make more please. If you can.

I truly enjoy how you captured Ven's innocent personality along with Vanitas's less-than-innocent one. Judging by the update date, this story is dead...But you write well. This story is great!

Please make more.

Hi! This is really cute! Please continue writing in it! I just found it, but hopefully I will be back when you have more!

1. THIS IS A MASTERPIECE, PLEASE SOMEONE MAKE IT INTO A BOOK! SO THAT I CAN READ IT IN CLASS AND NOT GET MY PHONE TAKEN AWAY... 2. CONTINUE PLEASE...3. I'M SORRY IF I MISSPELL ANYTHING, MY KEYBOARD {SUCKS}...4. PLEASE CONTINUE...PLEASE...5. MY KEYBOARD IS STUCK ON CAPS LOCKS, SORRY...

NYAAA Please update! T-This story is sho aweshome, please update as shoon as chu can, pwease?

I've been checking my email feverishly for this update. didn't realize I wanted fluff but apparently I really wanted fluff! I love both the fluff and the dark stuff, keep it coming. I'm looking forward to the next update!

thinking back, I wouldn't have imagined myself enjoying this type of fanfiction. but I'm really, really, really loving this. please do update soon, I look forward fo it!

Aqua feels just like a mom and Terra feels just like a dad. Ven's lucky to be getting hugs from them, I know I'd sure love a hug from them! really well written all around. under the circumstances I feel everyones pretty much in character, too.

I'm excited to see what's next!

Finally got around to reading this new chapter!

I liked it a lot content-wise; we're slowly starting to see a lot of different sides to Ven, and he just keeps on progressively getting more and more complex. Seeing his development alongside Aqua and Terra's adjustments are really interesting and sad to watch.

My only concrit would again be grammar; I noticed a couple of misuses of semicolons and commas - might want to proofread a little more thoroughly next time!

But yeah, another great chapter. Hope to read more soon!

it's been a while since this has been updated and i'm only just now discovering it, shame on me...
I honestly have no criticism to bear. I'm really enjoying this and I look forward to an update, if there's gonna be one!
update update update!

This is extremely interesting. I really like seeing someone take in Ventus' recovery into account, because it's obviously taken time for Ventus to reach the state we know him as in the beginning of Birth By Sleep. So, very intriguing premise, I've never really read a story with a focus on ageplay before, but it's not keeping me from reading. It adds another element to the story and Ventus' recovery, so I like the way you're developing this situation. It's going to take time, and I like it when it takes time for characters to recover from traumatic experiences. The character development here is good, and I think you're handling the situation pretty realistically, particularly with how the characters converse with Ventus depending on the state he's in. I don't think I could do that, as my poker faces aren't very good. You really have to handle a situation like this with balance.

It's a smooth read, the main thing I'm critiquing you on is the warnings you give in the beginning of the chapter. They are, mainly, variations of the same warning you gave in the very first chapter (though the diaper warning was probably needed). I think you can stop that. It gives away key elements of the chapter, which takes away some of the suspense/novelty of seeing these situations for ourselves. Sapping at our initial emotional response, since we already have an idea of what's coming. If something is really far/really pushing the boundaries, that's one thing (like something that would change the rating, for example), but otherwise your warnings are giving things away. If it's possible, maybe you could make them more vague? Instead of saying "mental breakdown due to separation", just say "mental breakdown", and we will discover the reason as we read. If something happens that's too confusing for us to understand, we will probably ask in the reviews, and then you'll get tips on how to structure your scenes in a way we can understand. This is a pretty minor thing, as I understand everyone has their own boundaries/ideas on what each rating allows for, but for me I wanted to skip the warnings because they gave away elements of the chapter. Kind of hard to do that when they're in bold print.

Otherwise, I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's nice to read more of your work, great job so far. I am noticing minor typos, but besides that your grammar is great here too. Until next time!

Justice T.

Thanks for writing this, this story has been very touching and brings comfort to me, please continue writing it.