When will you update? I like this story.

Hermes would be proud XD

I really hate when the author does this, say they're going to write a next chapter but then never do. so frustrating binging a good fanfiction to then find out that it's unfinished and never getting the satisfaction of knowing how it ends, and this is even worse due to the fact that it stops before the ending of lightning thief, having another 4 more books and another series.

I find it kind of disturbing how Rhea is mostly okay with her father's display of violent anger and isn't scared. Seems like she's attracted to that.

There's definitely no shortage of dark Poseidon in this story and in this chapter- Terrifying. I feel like he's somewhere between overprotective and obsessively possessive. It feels like a cycle of fluffy Rhea and Poseidon moments, then Poseidon gets angry at someone trying to get close to her or trying to hurt her, then more cutesy bonding, then murderous intent.

They have a really interesting relationship. He clearly would give the world to her or destroy the world for her. I wonder how different the story would be if she were Percy. Would he care as much since it wouldn't be a "daddy's little girl" situation?

please update soon!

Thank you. Seriously. Subtly highlighting Annabeth's insufferable self perceived superiority is a breath of fresh air. Truth be told, I dislike her character, extension to that of her mother. Yet all in all, this complex story is breathtaking. The fact that you made the main protagonist feminine is a plus, since we all know regardless of any tags, male Percy is usually nerfed and dumbed down to emphasize on his lack of intellect.

I like this. Rhea is a fairly relatable character. She has power at her fingertips but rarely feels the need to show it off, unless the situation calls for it. She's a strong female lead, yet doesn't take herself too seriously.

I loved this. You're a fantastic author.

For that, thank you.

There are few of you great authors to inspire some of us amateurs. Keep up the good work.
Cheers.

OMGS your book is amazing! I love how complex you made the characters and how deep the Gods feel. The way you wrote about the Gods are the best I've seen. Thank you for writing this book! I'm so excited for the next update, I can hardly wait! I hope your doing okay, as it has been years since you've updated this book.
Have a good day!

so, i really like your writing style. i read your story some years ago, when you had only posted up to the bus exploding. I was taking a break from my own writing to clear out my alerts, when i came across your story and it re-peaked my interest. so, I've just spent the last six and a half hours reading your story instead of writing my own... It's been some years since you last update, and yet i hold out hope that you will be returning to this story at some point. When you were writing this you were doing your A-levels, and in the following three years i guess that you got a job or went to university which i know is time consuming. despite whatever is keeping you away from this story, time or real life or lost plot bunnies/motivation, i still will keep an eye out to see if you will return. I will wait years for a good story

I'm really glad I stumbled upon your story, it's really awesome! See you next chapter :))

Ive always come back to reread this story. It's absolutely my favourite Percy Jackson fanfiction! I know you probably stopped continuing with this story and have other things to do but just wanted to say this, thank you for writing it this and for your hard work, I've read your comments about how some people keeps telling you what to write and all that, well you shouldn't bother with them cuz they're stupid and ignorant people who thinks they can do better when clearly they don't even know how to write a story let alone one as great as yours! Anyways I'm not even sure you'll see this but I still wanted to say it lolol thank you and bye!

Please please update soon

Wow.
This. Fic.
Ahhhh.
I love it.
It makes me so sad it hasn't been updated in 3 years.

Thanks~

Something I notice is that
Poseidon doesn't actually finish of threats
At least actually powerful ones in this story
Is annoying when the same people keep coming back to torture Rhea again and again
Ahh well
Am sure he'll be happy to discard that restraint soon enough