wtf is a pregnant smile rofl XD

Awe that was sweet. There really aren't enough first for this ship.

This is bad. I'm getting used to talking!Neo

This is sickeningly sweet and I love it. Despite having no idea how Neo actually speaks, you've fit dialogue into her character extremely well.

That was excellent. The noise was turned down, and the snark was turned all the way. I think this story really shows off the best sides of Neo and Roman. Good job.

Dear Author,
First, let me start off by saying that I agree with Mr. Torchwick one-hundred percent. Cinders' bad timing -is- in fact, exquisite. As is this story. It was a merry little bundle of laughs which was both sorely-needed and thoroughly enjoyed during a rather trying few weeks. I hope you enjoyed writing it, as I have very much enjoyed reading it.

P.S. Happy writing and many, many muses. Best of luck in you endeavors.
Yours sincerely,
VoidMaster.

Holy hell! I loved this! Neo messing with Roman teasing him about all of Rwby was amazing lmao! This pairing was great! I loved it.

Not bad. This isn't quite what I envisioned Neo would be like, but that's fanfiction for you. I'm a little sad that this is only a one-shot. It would've made for a very entertaining series. A collection of one-shots perhaps?

Just an idea.