Clever. Very clever. You nailed the point of how weird Padme is acting considering what she is hearing or on just how unbelievable her character is. Plus her shifting between rational 'Ani is a brat' self to irrational 'OMG ANI IS HAWT!11!' self is disturbing. Me thinks there was a disturbance in the Force there.

Padme had good points but when it came to Ani...WTF?

*snickers*

It's sort of... gradual, this one. The further you read into it, the more the sarcasm grows. And somehow you've managed to truly make the end into the cake's cherry.

And don't worry about Out of Character Amidala... that's what parody means, anyway... keep the general traits and satirize he rest.

You know, I think you skewered to death just about every single fanbrat delusion that came out of this series.

"OMG! He's so HAWT! who cares if he slaughtered millions? Teh HAWT is all that counts!1!"

Well, your story explains a lot. I wondered how those other stories could be written. Now I know. Thank you!

"In fact, as I think about it, I might have to reevaluate my relationship with Jar-Jar. Maybe I could have my bodyguard . . . ummm . . . talk to that irritating Gungan."

lol! that was sooooooo funny! that and "Oh, Annie, you’re soooooooooo cool."

you've got to write about the scene where she tells Anakin that she loves him...

That was hilarious! My favorite part must be (the paragraph building up to and) " Oh, Annie, you’re soooooooooo cool,"...god, I'm all out of breath from laughing so hard...

Fantastic parody.

That was great. Love the use of sarcasm.

That should have had AU stamped on it. Padme is a compassionate woman.

I like it! Very funny, dry humor. Good job!

A great big HA! to the last sentence of the story. Is it wrong that I had almost the exact same thoughts running through my mind when I saw the garage scene? Great stuff (I'm completely on board with this Padme!), and I hope you'll consider writing more - I'd love to hear your take on some of the Geonosis scenes! ;)