imagine this one shot is getting expand!

I have to say that so far all your short drabble stories are great. But in this one there is some mistake. When you let the kid speak, it reminded me to a 18-24 months old child instead of a five year old kid. I imagined a toddler instead of a big kid until you mentioned the age in the story.
"Mommy's budday, remwember? I hewp you with pressie." - no 5-year old speaks like that anymore. Communication is easily at that age. Kids can tell short stories and pronounce the sounds almost correctly.

Awwww, that one was quite sweet.

She punched him to save him . . . that's fantastic! At least they got out of there. Hopefully, staying out of there.

What did he do to make her leave in the first place? Hmmm.

James was nasty. *shivers*

So glad I'd read your one-shot before this one. How wonderful that you placed this in here. What a little treat. I love what Lord Edward said to the Baron.

What caused the glass to shatter? It was mentioned but, then you never said what broke. A window? A glass?

This was a fun one.

Meh.

Cute! Very cute.

Nope, didn't like this one. Edward wanting to use Bella to get back at Black. Uh-uh.

Definitely need more on this one . . . the prince and his betrothed princess . . . yes, please.

That was an interesting one. Art thieves . . . sure, why not. Enjoyable.

Oh this one was a good one . . . more please!