Why u don't continue

Why u don't continue this it is very good don't u know it au

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Haruta est une fille dans one piece blue deep

interesting to see Haruta being a marine

we understand, the story still will be awesome so there is no problem

1000 words ? Good job ! Haruta just have to bath at night no ? For the report... Did she have to send them regulary inevitabily ? She is infiltrate, it's an occurance in that condition to do low profile ! Didn't her superior know that ?!
Think you ! I like the behave of the pirate (Ace who burn Marco's paperwork and Thatch volontary for visit the woman's bath) ! Think you ! Bye !

Ohoh... I see trouble for haruta...

Thank you for the chapter ! I don't understand why you alternate the person… ("I" and "Her") Did Ace and Marco are together and is it just my mind who is insalubrious about the "insects bites" ? XD

No problem :) I liked this one too Also, am I looking too hard, out were those 'bug-bites' from Marco? XD

Nice story so far.:)

She run off ! Where is the courage of the marine ? XD
Thank for the chapter ! And Thatch hadn't the Observation Haki ? And why the beginning is at the first person and the rest at the three ? And I think too that 'kun' is for boy... Will she soon have friend ? (Other than Thatch and Natalie)
Cheer up for the next ! X)

Good chapter

Sorry, I didn't see this before, so I couldn't review. Anyway, I liked it

Oh man, this is so cute! I love Haru! Such a great female oc character and trust me, i hate female oc characters alot! Thanks for writing this Author-san! :D

*sits and waits patiently for the next chapter with a wide grin*