Words can't describe how beautiful this is. You did such an amazing job (this tore my heart in two, though).

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Loved it. You have a way with words that goes directly to the heart. Loved the way you explored Natsu's character.

God, it's so good. My eyes watered up by the end of it... Awesome writing 3

Oh wow that was so unique, you just have a way with words. I love when you talked about Lucy being the lights in his sky. It was really... captivating.

Oh. My. Gosh. I love it. Your writing style is truly amazing and as such I aspire to be as good as you are. I hope you continue to write beautiful stories. Until then, curlyQfox.

thats was really good.

I read this a couple of months ago and I didn't understand it then, I think I get it now.

That was wonderful.

Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. I feel that this actually depicts their relationship in a way, that he would do anything to protect her, no matter what.

Wow... That was really good.

Mdkenfiesmdlwmxow d oh myyyyyy T.T its so beautiful

I've spent most of today reading your various Nalu stories and I have to say, as wonderful as they all are, this is one of my favorites. You are truly an artist with words, and the way you string them together couldn't leave a clearer picture in my mind. I can see the blood staining his hands and how he flinches away from his redemption. I can feel his vulnerability as if it were my own. I can't help but be reminded of Lady Macbeth's stained hands, but this story is more hauntingly beautiful in its execution. Thank you for sharing your stories with us. I eagerly await your next update.

Ohmygosh, I love this take on Natsu! It's very interesting, and spetacularly written. Good job!

I admire this story, and relate to it so well. Just a beautiful piece of art.