...Im lost for words...Great job...

One of my favorites, for sure. ️️️

AWESOME! FINALLY ONE WITH AN ENDING! AND A HAPPY ONE! U DA BEST!

a sweet little story.

I dont find it realistic that Ash and Serena would tell Bonnie and Clemont what had happened in tee cave

WAY too many ...s

You know i typpically hate 1st person because its to sappy but u really made it work :)

Again one of the best fanfic I have ever read on this topic. I read one yesterday it was incomplete and made me go mad because it had lots and lots of negativity in it. Yours was great and somewhat positive too. People might say that you were shipping super fast but that's the way I like it fast. Man keep up the great work and make stories bigger at least more than 8 chapters.

that was a great story. i like the fact you brought gliscor and oshawott back, nice touch

Out of all the good Pokemon... Oshawott? I don't get what's so good about Oshawott? Out of Ash's all unova Pokemon, Oshawott is the most annoying Pokemon and he decided to bring him? And Oshawott clingling to Serena ... is kind of creepy.

Aside from Oshawott clinging to Serena, I enjoyed the rest of the chapter.

A very good story. I can't wait for the finale. Though a little more length would be greatly appreciated. Still, a wonderful story for a hopeless romantic like me.

Yay, please finish this story

Good fic so far, made me remember a fan made "comic" in when Serena discovers Ash past female companions i guess you based this fic on that.

This is pretty good

Nice well written story, keep it up!