I just love these two, but it saddened me to find out how Lisbon felt.

A lazy sunny Sunday morning, me in my favorite armchair with a cup of fresh coffee, and this sweet fanfic story to read.

I loved your touch here, describing J&L's tentative first steps being together. The tenderness they show to each other while making the decision not to avoid bringing up difficult subjects felt very real. Thank you waterbaby134!

Really nice storyloved it!

I loved the way you expressed the feelings of Lisbon, very realistic with the character! thanks, I really enjoyed

Beautiful! Perfectly in character! I loved it! I'd love to see more Jisbon from you!

*sigh* This was sweet, very lovely, and you definitely didn't sound out of practice to me! Thanks for sharing!

Whoever felt Waterbaby134 was out of practice, raise your hands. No one? Ok. Since I see no hands raised. So there you go. You had nothing to worry about. Also nice to have you back.

I think this would absolutely be on Lisbon's mind, and you did a wonderful job of writing about it. You set the scene beautifully, and had every moment true to their characters. Sad, but hopeful as well, and so very well done. Thank you for sharing.

It didn't show too much, or at all for what I could tell. This was adorable and brought up some really good points in my opinion. Excellent job. :)

This was great! Hope you write more soon!

So good to read another story from you! Thank you for posting it!
Teresa's inner dialogue and their conversation where heartbreaking, touching and very convincing. And as much as I love happy, romantic and funny fictions I am sure that you're closer to reality. I am very curious about how they will handle it on the show. I am hoping for both: The lighthearted and romantic side but also some darkness and problems from their past (not too much!).
Just in case you really don't want to continue this OS I so hope we will read more from you again in the near future!

Nice. I only hope we get this with the last season.

Very nicely done! And I love the characterization of Jane, especially at the beginning. Thanks for taking the time to write this!

Really liked reading about Lisbon's feelings on the subject of Jane's family, so believable. It was great to see her take the plunge to tell him the truth on a subject so painful and formerly secret to him. And that he wants to share it with her now. Thanks.

Wow, this is really great! If this is you out of practice, you must be amazing when you're at the top of your game! You voiced a lot of things that are in my head about what their transition will be like and I love the prospect of Jane learning to stop isolating himself and internalizing everything. Fantastic job!