Reviews for Laconic
Wika0304 chapter 17 . 5/15
please update, it's brilliant
turtlelly chapter 17 . 11/4/2019
Are you going to continue this story? It was so good!
accountdeactivated1234567890 chapter 17 . 11/25/2018
Omg! This is just so so amazing! Such a great Soundwave x OC fanfic! I really enjoyed reading this and I really really do hope that you continue this. There are a few errors on grammar and some misspelled words, but nothing to worry about. These can be edited easily. I really love your OC, Darkstrike, as she was a character of many flaws. Personally, I have moments, while reading some chapters, that I find her so irritating, when I finally understood why she acts the ways she is: control and approval, above all else. Some bad experiences can really take a toll on oneself and you really showed this side to your OC. Really great work! :)
Also, I’m pretty sure this is going to be a long long story if you consider going over the War For Cybertron and Fall Of Cybertron. Suggestion: You don’t need to go over some details unless you’re going to tell Darkstrike’s side of the story. I believe you can retell the stories of these two major events within six chapters, I guess. You write long chapters so I think six would be enough. I guess 3 chapters for War For Cybertron and 3 chapters for Fall Of Cybertron. But, that’s just a suggestion.
Really great work! Please do continue this if you get the chance! :) Keep this up!
Echo Fire chapter 17 . 8/9/2018
THIS IS AMAZING!
PLZ MORE!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/13/2018
It hasn’t been updated in a year
I’m weeping
echo018 chapter 17 . 5/28/2018
Is laconic discontinued? Sorry if it comes off rude.
cybergeek84 chapter 17 . 5/5/2018
I know it's been awhile, but I do hope to see more from this story. I hope everything is going alright. Keep up the good work
Guest chapter 17 . 12/12/2017
Hello, I just wanted to say, I think it is an awesome story, I really love it and I can't wait to read Soundwave's reaction, when he finds out, what happened with Darkstrike and Bomshock. So, please update as soon as you can. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
Excuse me i like this story but i have a question: i would like to know when you will continue A bee's stinger? I like more this story! Please answer me in the next chapter
Guest chapter 17 . 6/13/2017
Please continue "A bee's Stinger"
Guest chapter 17 . 4/15/2017
Your doing really well writing this! I enjoy it immensely and encourage you to write when you can. Thankyou! :)
Bec chapter 17 . 4/14/2017
Aww! I love this story! You have their relationship progress at a believable rate. Well done
AshMountian216 chapter 17 . 4/11/2017
Wow awesome chapter! Not gunna lie, when Barricades name popped up it surprised me lol
ObsessWitWeirdPairings chapter 17 . 4/11/2017
Whoa... I actually thought the insecticons were kinda cool, minus the situation with Darkstrike. She's changing and I think I like this character development.
The Jagdpanther chapter 17 . 4/11/2017
Well it's nice to see Darkstrike do something intelligent outside of ring even if it didn't last long. Keep up the good work though I wonder how she Will fit into the war. I wonder if Grimlock will appear as he seems the gladiator type?
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