Ahh I admit it I teared up when Johanna was in her room crying and feeling sad.

Aw poor Johanna. I find it kind of strange just how little she showed pain in the beginning of this chapter, like she hadn’t found out her dad was probably dead and she had something to do with it, but whatever

Omg! My heart to many feelings TT this was amazing and so beautiful written. O have reread this story so many times it never gets old; and it always, always, ALWAYS kills my emotions. Can't wait to read the sequel.

It's almost 2 am in the morning but I was hooked reading this story, it made me laugh, it made me cry, I had to add it to my favorites!

I've seen the anime, read the manga, and read countless fanfictions. THIS STILL MAKES ME CRY EVERY TIME.

I know this is super late, but I recently went through a FMA binge session and long story short here I am. Super cute story, I love how you kept Jo so relateable and human, and giving her her own original plot while also incorporating all the characters and their personalities. Definitely one of my fav fanfics out there. I look forward to your collection of oneshots you have in the next book-if you choose to continue it. Wish you the best.

Hi, I'm Leda Az and I'm here to tell you that I really love this story ! I'm french so I take a very long time to read each chapter (I'm missing vocabulary bruh) but I take a real pleasure to read your fanfiction, it's a big challenge I gave myself to improve my english level...it's a pleasure as a brain teaser for me XD
So, I really love Johanna whose reactions are very human, but she have a lot of courage and I love her relation with Elric Brothers.
Thank you for this story, I go back to read more :)

~Leda Az, a french reader ~

Holy- I freaking love thus story, so much sadness me heart ache at the part where she disappeared qwq keep up the amazing work! You inspired me to continue my Fullmetal Alchemists brotherhood stiry!

Have a bless day

“ I plan for Johanna and Edward to come back, just in snippets, small windows into their lives together. It will be it's own new story, when I do start it, a tale of oneshots dedicated to my favorite pairing.“

I’m excited can’t wait to read them :)

Pardon me...
TVs weren't around until 1927
Plus, we never saw any in either ver. of FMA.
So... I don't think Johanna could have seen anything on an invisible TV.

More filler please

You wrote please in french
It's s'il vous plait tho ok

Edward and Johanna
Sitting in a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G

I’m just going to throw this out there and say this is my most absolute favorite FMA fic. So many rollercoasters! I caught your fic when you were just a few chapters in and I remember feeling a little heart broken when you went on that hiatus. I’m so so happy to read it’s ending. I loved every single word you put into this and I will most definitely be back to read it again.

Thank you so much for Johanna! I’m looking forward to reading those little snippets of her’s and Edward’s time together.

Now off to MHA!

Noooooo *cries like a dugong*

Omg omg the end of this chapter is the fluffiest fluff ever, my heart melted~
Anyway, this review was long overdue, but to sum it up: At the beginning of the first chapter I've almost dropped it fearing it's one of "those" fanfics where MC is the naive girl from our world that loves [insert the series in question], *cough* author's SI, who just suddenly "woke up" in the [fantasy series in question]. Those ones rarely turn out good, so my fears had some sense. BUT, I've resumed reading and boy, did this story surprise me (in a good way). It's only chapter 12 I'm on now, but it had been absolutely amazing and I have high hopes for the rest of this story (thank god it's finished so I'll read without fear of author disappearing off the face of Earth).