Oh, wow! That is amazingly beautiful!

Agree with Suki issunsakihayami, this story NEEDS an epilogue!

although you posted this story so long ago, you should consider doing a epilougue to it, a more modern version of what happened in the future with Malachite coming back. After all you can't just leave it hanging like that.

Oh my... that was so good. You have to write more MalachiteXMina. You're very good. _ Good job.

OOooooh very angsty fic. Although I adore Mina/Malachite kawaii fics and that this is the first fic I have seen him being portrayed in this violent manner, I rather enjoyed the his dark personality. Oooh I hope to see more fics like these in the future.

Ja ne

Aer_seph4eva

keep it up!

alright i found it! i read half of this story once and then got kicked off, and couldn't remember the title! but now that i have may i be the first to say: sniff! perfect emotion wonderful description and psychological turmoil one hellava fic! great job hon!

sweet! I really like it!

This is a very nicely written story yet so sad. Good job )

::sniffles:: That was soo... ::cries big anime tears::

This was so sad...but very good. I would love to read more like this. I hope you'll write one for Mars.

...Aw...That was sad...*sniff sniff* But i really liked it. _

Don't mind me, I'm just cruisin' through your fics . That was so sad, (and I don't even like Sailor Venus much!). You're such a skilled writer!

Good Story can't wait for the Jupiter one

That was really good. I like how you used her point of view. I would like to see more stories like this. Keep writing!

uuummmmm...interesting. i've never heard of sailor mask, do you mean sailor mars? in the manga, malachite did not fall for zoisite, those two were made a couple in the anime. interesting story, it shouldn't be rated r though, definately pg-13. anywho...keep it up. i'm looking forward to the next chapters.