Oh God that was the hottest H/Hr shagathon I've ever bloody read. Hermione's despair over Harry's confession making her hate fucking him was - WOW. Its stories like yours why I love and ship H/Hr so hard, the idea of bringing them together can shatter entire universes in people's perfectly happy lives, its just so real.

I hope you are well dear Diablolita, although I'm upset this story did not finish and you have no other stories I can binge upon, I'm happy how you left it off. Hoping you are well really, thank you.

I love this story so much. One of the best H/Hr stories I have ever read and I've practically read them ALL. Characterization true to canon having a lot to do with my pickiness in H/Hr fics, and yours ranks among the very best.

I love the addition of Pansy sticking her nose into Harry and Hermione's business, but it saddens me to know the story only has 1 chapter left, why didn't you finish this?! About Ginny and Harry, I always get bothered when I see them together but your Ginny is so real and genuine and true to her character its amazing, really.

I've also never sympathize for Ginny and Ron in any other H/Hr story as much as yours, I feel so bad for your Ron, Hermione loves him dearly, but I have a feeling her true love lies with Harry and vice versa, and their selfless personalities just refuse to believe it.

Despite the story being unfinished(I think) I hope you are doing well and I hope you know how much I appreciate your brilliant work for the H/Hr ship, may it sail on forever

Oh my God, Ginny telling Harry he's having an affair with Hermione scared the shit out of me for some reason. Your Ginny really is the best Ginny I've ever read I think, reminds me of how Slytherin she can be and that makes her kind of terrifying to deal with if your in Harry's shoes.

I also like your addition of Pansy, a character with loads of potential, reminds me in Draco in a lot of ways. I wish you had more lengthy stories to read, its very rare to find writers that ace the Harry Potter characters in dialogue and personality and your writing style is very much like canon.

You perfectly conveyed my feelings about your Hermione's feelings for the entire situation she was in with Harry and Ron nearing the end of this chapter. She's just as terrified as Harry is about hurting the people they love and the act she is putting up is so unbearable!

But that is Hermione, your characterizations are so perfect. Hermione and Harry being selfless and selfish at the same time is exactly how I think an affair between them would play out.

I really am amazed by the lack of reviews this story has, its imo a better and more simplified version of "Unlike a Sister" that just drags the angst on for 50 or something chapters just to see Hermione get fingered in the end.

God you really know how to execute Harry and Hermione flirting/shagging it makes my breathing hitch! And ignore the dipshit guest before me, just seen their review and I assume they fancy themselves the jealous/spoiled/self entitled embodiment of Ron/Ginny.

Your story deserves more reviews than it has, but on this website it is the insufferably and overdone cliche fics that get the most attention. I'm sure if this was posted on Ao3 it would be at the very top.

Amazing chapter. Your Ginny is perhaps one of the best Ginny's I've ever read. Best as in completely and totally in-character. Characterization is key when it comes to my interest in any fanfic, yours receives an 'O'.

Your Harry is totally fucked up, but in a very real way, your characterizations are also frighteningly accurate.

I feel so bad for Harry and Hermione but most of all for Ron. He is such a bro in this and doesn't deserve the betrayal.

I blame Hermione mostly. She is completely torn, and it is a conflict I can really see her having, scared shitless to solve it besides letting it drag on and try to forget. Really heavy writing Diablolita!

Wow. That was intense, as intense as only Harry and Hermione could ever make it. And hot. I think the hottest shag I have ever read. And sad! Poor them!

Bad grammar, bad story, bad idea always a bad,no stupid idea to write a story where Harry would ever even think about being with that bossy no good evil bushy haired bitch wish Ron never saved her from that troll

It’s been 5 years, so I doubt that you’ll update this story, but I really would have loved to know how this would all play out. Wonderful writing. I love how you’ve added such depth to the characters. Few people address the physiological damage that they suffered- especially Harry’s abusive childhood.
Excellent story.

This is fantastic.

Suuuuuuuuuch an amazing story you've written. It's heart-breaking, sweet, hilarious and hot all at once. I hope you get to finish it some day, but it's already a masterpiece.

This story has me extremely conflicted and for a multitude of different reasons. I'm not sure if you're active on this site but I feel the need to spell out the likes and dislikes I have:

1. My biggest issue with this story is the inclusion of Pansy. I can't stand her - in the books, movies (where she had several lines throughout the entire series), and here, in your story. Nothing about her is interesting and when she moved into Grimmauld Place, I almost put the story down.

2. Another problem I have is that I can't see Harry, Ron, or Hermione acting the way they do here. It's all very OOC and appeared as if I actually wasn't reading Harry, Ron, and Hermione but instead OC's with the guises of Harry, Ron, and Hermione. The first chapter was especially jarring but it's something I ignored in order for me to finish what you have written. Ginny, too, was a bit OOC, especially with the scenes with her mother.

3. Your writing is nearly, if not, perfect. The way you describe Harry, Ron, and Hermione's feelings about the war is both stunning and haunting. Also, your spelling and grammar is flawless.

4. Finally, you stopped the story just when it got interesting! Hearing about the "Mud Insurgents" and Kingsley keeping Harry in the dark about such activity; Death Eater re-roganization in other parts of Europe; the infiltration of England's pureblood orthodoxy! It's just insane you left things where you did. But with no update since 2014, it's hard to believe you'll come back because even with my first two points being rather negative, I would've finished this to the end.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Shame you abandoned this, I was really enthralled reading it

This needs to be updated! I need an ending to this amazing story!