| Reviews for Mittens |
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Cowboy-4-Christ chapter 1 . 11/13/2016 This is a good story, I enjoyed it very much |
ScribeofHeroes chapter 1 . 9/17/2014 Favorite lines- "She waited only a few more minutes longer than she would have with Peter before the massive Centaur gave a curt nod." "(Lucy) didn't know why Peter and Susan had been doubtful about Oreius agreeing to take her." Oh yes, not even Oreius can withstand the pleading Lucy for long. :) I love how you show that Lucy not only expects and sees the goodness in others, but brings it out of them as well. She seems to be an un-dimmable light of faith of joy doesn't she? :) I also appreciated the details and logic you give to the Narnian world. The descriptions of the creatures at the gathering were vivid and made sense. I especially loved they way you explained Naiads and Nereids . Good old Oreius, privately explaining them to Lucy, and good for Lucy for asking so discreetly. :) I love reading your stories and have missed doing so. This was a great one to come back to. Thank you for writing the full story of "Mittens." This piece showcases the wonder of Narnia and its youngest Queen. :) Keep Writing! God Bless ScribeofHeroes |
Tiny Teddy chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 SO adorable! I loved Nyx, and sweet Lucy, and Oreius being a father to her. And Humphrey the Bear! :) :) That made me laugh. Thanks! |
quarterhorseranch chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 :D So adorable! Oreius is such a softie at heart. |
Jesus' girl 4ever chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 Aww, that was so cute! I love how she kissed his cheek and he had to regain his composure. :) |
MCH chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 Typical Lucy and she finds new friends for her sibling to meet. Plus a typical Lucy response to the situation more mittens. But being Lucy she'll need plenty of mittens. |
trustingHim17 chapter 1 . 9/3/2014 :D love it. lucy's adorable |
WillowDryad chapter 1 . 9/3/2014 Awww, so cute. Tiny!Lucy with Oreius to look after her. Oooh, and it was all so very Narnian. And so Lucy to give away her mittens. Lovely! |