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AnimeFairy612 chapter 21 . 10/10/2015
I had the same problem with some of my stories a while ago. I had it planned how I wanted it to end, but I wanted it to take a while before reaching the end and the thing I needed for that, dare I say it, was filler chapters. I'm the kind of person who hates fillers but sometimes they are the only way you can progress a story. The main thing I suggest you do here, is have them really start to get to know each other better. You've already begun it really, like them getting to now about each others families and you've already done their friends so what I suggest is sometimes the couple just hang out, ending it with a sweet kiss, even if it isn't much. I hope I've helped you because I really like this story and I would love for it to continue. If not, I'm sure you could find someone who wants to take over the story if you have completely given up on it. Thanks. AnimeFairy612.
cookie panda-roo chapter 21 . 5/20/2015
maybe you could build a bit of tension before you reveal Lucy's scars about her dad. It was bit like "What the hell!" when you revealed that randomly (hope that didn't sound rude" Like Showing slight flashbacks but not revealing the full picture but revealing a little more each time she flashbacks. Maybe show more tension between Lisanna and Lucy and build up to her being more and more physical in her "Stay away from Natsu thing." Talk a bit about her transfer at the start and do a few more chapter where Natsu is complimenting Lucy before he reveals he likes her. But each time add some extra small things like him becoming more romantic and sensual in the way he's trying to make her like him.

The storyline could simply be Natsu trying to win Lucy's heart and it could centre around her past as well, so Lucy overcoming past traumas and stuff? You don't really need to rewrite it but maybe pad it out a bit by adding a few chapters in the beginning or just adding stuff to ones you've already published.

I like the story you've written and i hope this helped a bit :)
:D
Sasha chapter 21 . 5/7/2015
Why don't u do something with Lucy's scars and her dad and natsu finding out or something with her scars
GottaLoveOtakus chapter 21 . 5/5/2015
hm... how bout Lucy starts investigating about Natsu's parents? she'd ask around, maybe look up on the internet some stuff. But that there's a secret behind it huehuehue oknot. that just sucked.

I don't really know how i could help you, but uhm... how about stuff starts coming in between them? such as men, girls, personal reasons, or simply shet :3 if not, maybe you could let me know vaguely of where you'd like this story to go to. I kinda need references to give out good ideas n,n
beingthedifferentme chapter 21 . 5/4/2015
Honestly, I don't think that the story is rushed much. Sure, there are some things, but you were just excited about the story, I get that. All in all, I think it's great the way it is. Anyway, I think that the obvious plot line here is that Natsu has to eventually find out about Lucy's family situation. Maybe Jude shows up and something happens, like he tries to take her back, and Natsu comforts her? Or maybe you choose a whole other plot line and make Natsu finding out a one-chapter thing. (Natsu does have to find out eventually, though.) Maybe Lisanna continues to bully Lucy, and Natsu puts a stop to it? Or Lucy gets hurt in an accident and Natsu has to help her deal with her injuries (I kinda did this one for my first story and it worked out well)? The story is yours, and nobody else can write it. I strongly urge you to just continue your story, not rewrite it, but the choice is yours. It's your story.
Els Ineel chapter 21 . 5/4/2015
She should asked Natsu that he is lying or not about his parents. Or make more drama ,like Lisanna heard the rumor said that she beated Lucy and she wanted a revenge on Lucy for telling the trust... than I don't know. It your story ,you can make anything, cause I don't want to spoiled it. Geehee
~Sorry about my grammar I'm still a nood...lol
Ruby Heartfillia chapter 21 . 5/3/2015
I want to see a confrontation between Lucy and her dad. And some other pairings like GruVia and Gale and JErza
iizzye chapter 21 . 5/3/2015
I really love this story but heres an idea: what id Lucy could draw really awesome andre one Day Natsu walks in and sees that she drawes av dragon? (BBut Lucy is REALLY shy when it comes to show her drawings? )
EmmyHippo chapter 21 . 5/3/2015
Well, if you want to, you can also focus a bit more on some of the other couples and have Natsu and Lucy try to get them together if you like, or, you could always do a bit of games and such in P.E. other than running, like dodgeball, or freeze tag, or sprite tag(it's like the opposite of tag where everyone is it and tries to get other people down, and if you get tagged, you're down until somebody tags the person who tagged you down. and so forth.) . ORRRRRR, you could do a big picnic lunch with everyone with fun and games and potato sack races and 3 legged races, rolling down a hill and pinatas! those are just some of my ideas~~~! Thanks~~! (Also, thanks for following me/my story and having favorited my my story as well, I'm glad I got to find this! ~ )
Guest chapter 21 . 5/3/2015
Have Lucy explain to natsu about the scars
Pls!
yesimsleepingcurrently chapter 20 . 3/19/2015
Oi! It was not a sucky chapter! I liked it! :)
amgonnaburst chapter 19 . 3/14/2015
GAAHHH! NEXT CHAPTER! I'M CURIOUS HEERRREEEE! D'x
BitterLovingDuringYourDemise chapter 19 . 1/25/2015
*crashes around like natsu would, fire coming out of mouth* NNNNNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! GET YOUR LAZY BUTT UP, AND UPDAAAAAAAAAAATE! OR ELSE I WON'T GHOST OF YOU IN NATSU AND LUCY'S VERSIOOOOON!
younganimegoddess chapter 19 . 1/10/2015
I love this story! like you cant just leave people hanging like that lol! but anyway update soon!
SouthParkKyman chapter 19 . 1/3/2015
Yay! Wendy's in the story now!
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