Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's adorable and sweet and awwwwwwwwww PETER!

This is beautiful. I adored it. Wendy/Peter Pan is never something I'd entertained, but this was perfection.

Love this! So amazingly written! DarlingPan ftw! :3

Ooooh you watch Once Upon A Time? I follow you for your Dramione fics but I am obsessed with OUAT and to see one of my fave Dramione ff writers doing a fic for Once (seriously, it's my current addiction and all I ever think about) is amazing! I don't even ship Pan with anyone but this was amazingly written. You gave Wendy so much depth and even made Pan likeable for like a second there, I was like, whoa, who is this Pan and why am I liking him? I wish he and Wendy had more moments on the show since these two have always had great connection in any retelling of their story. But this was a fantastic way to make up for the show's lack of Wendy/Pan interaction. Love the imagery and the description of Wendy's thoughts. So enthralling! As enthralling as Pan's flute playing here!

This is very nicely written! Great job!

Great! Please continue!