Awesome, hot. Describing Heine as someone with 'sharp teeth and a sharper tongue is on-point. Good work.

It's so beautifully messy. I can't even find the right words to say it. Heine. Naoto. Like a fucking explosion.

eee finally someone else who can relate. yay.

Oh myyyyyyy, so you, too, belong to the "Dogs" fandom now? ;)
Let me tell you, every time I read a chapter, I sense this weird, rough tension between Naoto and Heine. You used this feeling to its fullest, it was so damn intense and very enjoyable, sexy.
If Miwa ever decides to finally hook them up, I hope it'll be similar to this fic.
I love it.

Ah, I can TOTALLY see this happening between them...Badou's the "only sane man" on this team isn't he? (Yeah right.)